If you saw yourself through my eyes (21)
Ah that poem is lovely , enjoyed reading it !
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Thank you, love it!
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that was very good...i like that very much....
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That is very good. 
So why will he never know?
So why will he never know?
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crystal_2010: here is something i just wrote:
If you saw in yourself what I see in you,
You would never wish to be someone else…even for a second.
If you saw yourself through my eyes,
No one would seem more beautiful to you than you yourself.
The tides that roar in my heart every time I see you,
You’ll never know.
The stampede which starts through my veins every time we touch,
You’ll never know.
The lightning which strikes my mind when I hear your voice,
You’ll never know.
If you saw in yourself what I see in you,
You would brighten up your own day
With the sparkle of your own eyes.
You say the mirror lies to you,
I am your mirror…and I’m not lying,
If you saw in yourself what I see in you,
You would put narcissus to shame.
If you saw in yourself what I see in you,
You would never wish to be someone else…even for a second.
If you saw yourself through my eyes,
No one would seem more beautiful to you than you yourself.
The tides that roar in my heart every time I see you,
You’ll never know.
The stampede which starts through my veins every time we touch,
You’ll never know.
The lightning which strikes my mind when I hear your voice,
You’ll never know.
If you saw in yourself what I see in you,
You would brighten up your own day
With the sparkle of your own eyes.
You say the mirror lies to you,
I am your mirror…and I’m not lying,
If you saw in yourself what I see in you,
You would put narcissus to shame.
Yeah.
We wanna know why he well never know?
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crystal_2010: here is something i just wrote:
If you saw in yourself what I see in you,
You would never wish to be someone else…even for a second.
If you saw yourself through my eyes,
No one would seem more beautiful to you than you yourself.
The tides that roar in my heart every time I see you,
You’ll never know.
The stampede which starts through my veins every time we touch,
You’ll never know.
The lightning which strikes my mind when I hear your voice,
You’ll never know.
If you saw in yourself what I see in you,
You would brighten up your own day
With the sparkle of your own eyes.
You say the mirror lies to you,
I am your mirror…and I’m not lying,
If you saw in yourself what I see in you,
You would put narcissus to shame.
If you saw in yourself what I see in you,
You would never wish to be someone else…even for a second.
If you saw yourself through my eyes,
No one would seem more beautiful to you than you yourself.
The tides that roar in my heart every time I see you,
You’ll never know.
The stampede which starts through my veins every time we touch,
You’ll never know.
The lightning which strikes my mind when I hear your voice,
You’ll never know.
If you saw in yourself what I see in you,
You would brighten up your own day
With the sparkle of your own eyes.
You say the mirror lies to you,
I am your mirror…and I’m not lying,
If you saw in yourself what I see in you,
You would put narcissus to shame.
Very well put,
I have seen, and been seen that way,
I've tried relationships with less,
I won't be trying another one that way,
will likely be single a long time,
it's worth it.
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crystal_2010: here is something i just wrote:
If you saw in yourself what I see in you,
You would never wish to be someone else…even for a second.
If you saw yourself through my eyes,
No one would seem more beautiful to you than you yourself.
The tides that roar in my heart every time I see you,
You’ll never know.
The stampede which starts through my veins every time we touch,
You’ll never know.
The lightning which strikes my mind when I hear your voice,
You’ll never know.
If you saw in yourself what I see in you,
You would brighten up your own day
With the sparkle of your own eyes.
You say the mirror lies to you,
I am your mirror…and I’m not lying,
If you saw in yourself what I see in you,
You would put narcissus to shame.
If you saw in yourself what I see in you,
You would never wish to be someone else…even for a second.
If you saw yourself through my eyes,
No one would seem more beautiful to you than you yourself.
The tides that roar in my heart every time I see you,
You’ll never know.
The stampede which starts through my veins every time we touch,
You’ll never know.
The lightning which strikes my mind when I hear your voice,
You’ll never know.
If you saw in yourself what I see in you,
You would brighten up your own day
With the sparkle of your own eyes.
You say the mirror lies to you,
I am your mirror…and I’m not lying,
If you saw in yourself what I see in you,
You would put narcissus to shame.
I think I see,,is a nice words
;-}
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Very nicely written
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the poem is nice
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i'm seeing this thread after a long time. he does know now :-) he knows and he feels it. i feel it too as i have always felt it. this feeling gets stronger everyday :-) thank you for the great feedback on my poem
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Ok she has a school girl crush,
I'm sure she will get over it
I'm sure she will get over it
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well how old are you?
old enuf to not know how appropriate your post is?
how absolutely necessary?
old enuf to not know how appropriate your post is?
how absolutely necessary?
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Doose: This girl wrote these pretty words for me, she's good. She's also a liar. She's only 17 years old.
That is quite an accusation!If you feel you have a Case,take it to the Mods,don't air it in the Forum!
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Doose: This girl wrote these pretty words for me, she's good. She's also a liar. She's only 17 years old.
sorry to hear that dear smile we all live and learn from your mistakes just remeber i'll always be here for you 
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***If you saw yourself through my eyes
Then I couldn't see you, because you would have my eyes and then I wouldn't be able to see you at all because I would be blind and being blind wouls mean that I wouldn't know that you have two sets of eyes and thereby would be a freak of nature but I wouldn't care because I would be using braille to get to know you better and the parts I would be concentrating on wouldn't be your eyes, and....wait, where was I
Then I couldn't see you, because you would have my eyes and then I wouldn't be able to see you at all because I would be blind and being blind wouls mean that I wouldn't know that you have two sets of eyes and thereby would be a freak of nature but I wouldn't care because I would be using braille to get to know you better and the parts I would be concentrating on wouldn't be your eyes, and....wait, where was I
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beautiful and very passionate 
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If you saw in yourself what I see in you,
You would never wish to be someone else…even for a second.
If you saw yourself through my eyes,
No one would seem more beautiful to you than you yourself.
The tides that roar in my heart every time I see you,
You’ll never know.
The stampede which starts through my veins every time we touch,
You’ll never know.
The lightning which strikes my mind when I hear your voice,
You’ll never know.
If you saw in yourself what I see in you,
You would brighten up your own day
With the sparkle of your own eyes.
You say the mirror lies to you,
I am your mirror…and I’m not lying,
If you saw in yourself what I see in you,
You would put narcissus to shame.