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Nov 21, 2008 12:02 PM CST Please slow down.....................
hollandgirl
hollandgirlhollandgirlSomewhere in Canada. B.C., British Columbia Canada523 Threads 4,464 Posts
Jack took a long look at his speedometer before slowing down: 73 in a 55 zone. Fourth time in as many months. How could a guy get caught so often?


When his car had slowed to 10 miles an hour, Jack pulled over, but only partially. Let the cop worry about the potential traffic hazard. Maybe some other car will tweak his backside with a mirror. The cop was stepping out of his car, the big pad in hand.

Bob? Bob from Church? Jack sunk farther into his trench coat. This was worse than the coming ticket. A cop catching a guy from his own church. A guy who happened to be a little eager to get home after a long day at the office. A guy he was about to play golf with tomorrow.

Jumping out of the car, he approached a man he saw every Sunday, a man he'd never seen in uniform.

Hi, Bob. Fancy meeting you like this.'

'Hello, Jack.' No smile.

'Guess you caught me red-handed in a rush to see my wife and kids.'

'Yeah, I guess.' Bob seemed uncertain. Good.

'I've seen some long days at the office lately. I'm afraid I bent the rules a bit -just this once.'

Jack toed at a pebble on the pavement. 'Diane said something about roast beef and potatoes tonight. Know what I mean?' 'I know what you mean. I also know that you have a reputation in our precinct .' Ouch. This was not going in the right direction. Time to change tactics.

'What'd you clock me at?'

'Seventy. Would you sit back in your car please?'

'Now wait a minute here, Bob. I checked as soon as I saw you. I was barely nudging 65.' The lie seemed to come easier with every ticket.

'Please, Jack, in the car'

Flustered, Jack hunched himself through the still-open door. Slamming it shut, he stared at the dashboard. He was in no rush to open the window.

The minutes ticked by. Bob scribbled away on the pad.

Why hadn't he asked for a driver's license?

Whatever the reason, it would be a month of Sundays before Jack ever sat near this cop again. A tap on the door jerked his head to the left. There was Bob, a folded paper in hand Jack rolled down the window a mere two inches, just enough room for Bob to pass him the slip.

'Thanks.' Jack could not quite keep the sneer out of his voice.

Bob returned to his police car without a word. Jack watched his retreat in the mirror. Jack unfolded the sheet of paper. How much was this one going to cost?

Wait a minute. What was this? Some kind of joke?

Certainly not a ticket. Jack began to read:

'Dear Jack, Once upon a time I had a daughter. She was six when killed by a car. You guessed it- a speeding driver. A fine and three months in jail, and the man was free. Free to hug his daughters, all three of them. I only had one, and I'm going to have to wait until Heaven before I can ever hug her again.

A thousand times I've tried to forgive that man. A thousand times I thought I had. Maybe I did, but I need to do it again. Even now. Pray for me. And be careful, Jack, my son is all I have left.'

'Bob'
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Nov 21, 2008 12:12 PM CST Please slow down.....................
druidess6308
druidess6308druidess6308Aliquippa, Pennsylvania USA79 Threads 13,695 Posts
crying That was beautiful, Jenny. hug
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Nov 21, 2008 12:31 PM CST Please slow down.....................
mastic55
mastic55mastic55Long Island, New York USA167 Threads 6,859 Posts
Nice story, I just read it....
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Nov 21, 2008 12:34 PM CST Please slow down.....................
samora77
samora77samora77Staten Island, New York USA39 Threads 543 Posts
Jenny girl you still got it ---It's beautiful ...Thank's.hug
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Nov 21, 2008 12:34 PM CST Please slow down.....................
shipoker58
shipoker58shipoker58Las Vegas, Nevada USA30 Threads 2,969 Posts
mastic55: Nice story, I just read it....





even made me feel something!!
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Nov 21, 2008 12:39 PM CST Please slow down.....................
brokenspirit
brokenspiritbrokenspiritLittlespot, Nebraska USA41 Threads 603 Posts
Beautiful heart - warming story Holland.





Hi Ship, Nice to see you, how was the transition?
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Nov 21, 2008 1:45 PM CST Please slow down.....................
mastic55
mastic55mastic55Long Island, New York USA167 Threads 6,859 Posts
shipoker58: even made me feel something!!
Good to see you back, thumbs up
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Nov 21, 2008 2:12 PM CST Please slow down.....................
hollandgirl
hollandgirlhollandgirlSomewhere in Canada. B.C., British Columbia Canada523 Threads 4,464 Posts
omurchu22: Hi Mastic .I see you got the point of the story lol...

Yeh i know youve posted in the wrong thread, sorry i couldnt resist
Nice post Holland ...Great story and maybe ill slow down a bit in the future


rolling on the floor laughing Ha yep someone got a little lost
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Nov 21, 2008 2:15 PM CST Please slow down.....................
thumbs up
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Nov 21, 2008 9:03 PM CST Please slow down.....................
hollandgirl
hollandgirlhollandgirlSomewhere in Canada. B.C., British Columbia Canada523 Threads 4,464 Posts
shipoker58: even made me feel something!!


That is good news skip
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Mar 17, 2009 6:56 AM CST Please slow down.....................
hollandgirl
hollandgirlhollandgirlSomewhere in Canada. B.C., British Columbia Canada523 Threads 4,464 Posts
Just bumping this one wave
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