SummervanillaMexico, Mexico City MexicoOct 1, 2010
Elegant and sweet! Loved this write, thank you, iluvisis
andrew149Southbourne, nr.Bournemouth, Dorset, England UKOct 1, 2010
A beautiful poem, thankyou......Andrew....xxx
Vetri32Singapore, Central Singapore SingaporeOct 1, 2010
My love is like a flower new( like all flower it will wilt and wither) when bursting into sight (the moment is too soon to last) transforms the ground with blinding (does not have the sustenance to be ever shine) speed and effervescent light.( temporary brightness and dimmed forever)
It blossoms out in warm reponse ( like all botany family it will dry and be crinky) and settles into air ( become the dut and dried particles on the ground) And gently rests with nonchalance ( it's presence a forgorn memory) a gem without a care. ( no one remembers a dead flower that is gone forever ) how is that or being a poem popper
Thank you Vetri 32 for your comments. From your use of verbiage, you display a great deal of pessimism. But that is great because it really made you think.Have a wonderful day!
And thank YOU to Summervanilla and Andrew149!!!I am honored.
Vetri32Singapore, Central Singapore SingaporeOct 1, 2010
I am a pessimist only 25%, ypou know most of the beauty of the world ir ruined cuase of the major use of enhanced material to get hing to grow bigger, fatter, faster - Genetically Modified got me on a roll to psuh out the beauty and show out the ugly
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when bursting into sight (the moment is too soon to last)
transforms the ground with blinding (does not have the sustenance to be ever shine)
speed and effervescent light.( temporary brightness and dimmed forever)
It blossoms out in warm reponse ( like all botany family it will dry and be crinky)
and settles into air ( become the dut and dried particles on the ground)
And gently rests with nonchalance ( it's presence a forgorn memory)
a gem without a care. ( no one remembers a dead flower that is gone forever )
how is that or being a poem popper
got me on a roll to psuh out the beauty and show out the ugly