Seed

My love is like a flower new
when bursting into sight
transforms the ground with blinding
speed and effervescent light.

It blossoms out in warm repose
and settles into air
And gently rests with nonchalance
a gem without a care.
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Posted: Sep 2010
About this poem:
This poem came to me quickly a while back. The words just flew into my head and left me happy. Please let me know what you think of it. Thank you.

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Comments (7)

Summervanilla
Elegant and sweet! Loved this write, thank you, iluvisis rose
andrew149
A beautiful poem, thankyou......Andrew....xxx
Vetri32
My love is like a flower new( like all flower it will wilt and wither)
when bursting into sight (the moment is too soon to last)
transforms the ground with blinding (does not have the sustenance to be ever shine)
speed and effervescent light.( temporary brightness and dimmed forever)

It blossoms out in warm reponse ( like all botany family it will dry and be crinky)
and settles into air ( become the dut and dried particles on the ground)
And gently rests with nonchalance ( it's presence a forgorn memory)
a gem without a care. ( no one remembers a dead flower that is gone forever )
how is that or being a poem popper
iluvisis1
Thank you Vetri 32 for your comments. From your use of verbiage, you display a great deal of pessimism. But that is great because it really made you think.Have a wonderful day!
iluvisis1
And thank YOU to Summervanilla and Andrew149!!!I am honored.applause
Vetri32
I am a pessimist only 25%, ypou know most of the beauty of the world ir ruined cuase of the major use of enhanced material to get hing to grow bigger, fatter, faster - Genetically Modified
got me on a roll to psuh out the beauty and show out the ugly
hedistuff
very nice....and were a blossum permanent, it's all value and glory would end...
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