"Sunlight"

String me

between
space and time

delicate yet raw fingers

eyes bleeding tears

from hence long ago

smothered dark clouds
that once swathed our spirit

dampness awakening
into the sunlight

crawling out again

flickering sockets
steadfast

accepting the sun


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SS
xx
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Posted: Nov 2010
About this poem:
walking within our own sun
xx
Sophia

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Comments (17)

gotitall
watch out for the shadows, keep your sun bright, nice poem sophia.
kickit22
Can't be nothen better then the morning sunlight on a crisp Sunday morning. reminds me of those sunday mornings I don't get to many chances to enjoy those anymore.thank you for sharingcheers
niah9
Makes one think outside the square...always good for you. Nice one SS...Niah....yay bouquet
jeddah12
a very refreshing poem from you always sophia.thanks for the sunshine you brought on us;wine bouquet
Redex
And its a lovely walk towards brighter timesthumbs up
doinkclown
LOVE THIS POEM -- REMINDS ME OF THE TIMES I SPENT IN MY SHED WELDING OLD BROKEN HORSE SHOES TOGETHER FOR THE HOMELESS HORSES
Gashly
soph...don't forget your shades. you have a radiance which blinds us all!
how is it, the sun can dry all the tears...yet refuses to cut through oppressive humidity? i wonder...too much, sometimes.

accept the sun, upon crawling out again. i'll wait for stars. ha!

loved it, yo.

more love... hug
more flowers, brought to you by the SUN... bouquet
mike7375
Reminds me of emerging through bad times into brighter and happier days. Lovely poem Sophiasummer bouquet
sophiasummer
Hi Ben!

Thank you so much! - I understand to look sometimes behind me, into the wake, that can cast great shadows.

Sophia
xx
sophiasummer
Thank you Kickit22!

Your comments, I'm glad you enjoyed! seeing and feeling a write, is humbling, to the writer

Sophia
xx
sophiasummer
Hello Niah!
Oh yes, very refreshing outside the box...thank you for your kind words, I appreciate them.
Love Sophia
xx
teddybear bouquet

Sweet Jeddah!

You bask! thank you for looking in again!
I smile, you are such a contented soul....

Love Sophia
xx
bouquet hugs more hugs!


Redex!
What more can I say! its such pleasure to have you comment!
Tis truly a wonderful walk...
But one has to begin that walk on their own..

Thank you Redex

Love Sophia
xx
bouquet hug
Macduff5
This is a very subconscious poem and as usual I join your fan club of admirers. Keep them coming mysterious Sophia
angel
HotrodLarrys
Hi Sophia.

abandonment

a Boarded House

Locked Doors

Closed for Restoration

Accepted Modifications

Reconstructed

Restored

Open House= Sunshine

and Hope...

Very Nice.... Hotrodhug yay
sophiasummer
Hello Jen!
Ok have my wrap arounds on, chicks from the hood!
For real!
head banger

Personal humidity,I think it is in the clouds we create within our selves, at times they hang very low, I dreamed one night that that sky fell to the earth, and everyone had to move on their knees..I was terrified, I was only eight.... blues

Yet wonderment, as you say, you wonder too much, well thats a great!!!! thing!!!! sweetheart, to do, because we are figuring things, looking outward, by the way, my sky dosen't fall down any more, as I wondered about it through the years....A child's wonderment, is a sad thing to put to one side within our own selves as we grew older, something we and many will never do. yay!!!

Thank you

Love Soph
xx
just more more more
hug bouquet
couldnt find any stars in the night icon, so, put your head up and check out the southern cross, that is what I see every night from my cottage.
See you there!

Peace Love Happiness
to you and yours...
Just sorting my out my telescope..
sophiasummer
Hello Mike!
Thank you, a peeking and moving towards that sun and peace, you truly understand my write.
Beautiful


Sophia
xx
bouquet
Gashly
soph! sorting out telescopes, bring the focus. a dream of falling sky...was everything black, or white, in the absence? see, WONDERING! always.

no CRUX in my night vision, alas, too far north over the ridge for my amazed eyes...saw hundreds of the shining jewels last night though, clear as a bell. orion waved in his aim for the little bear.

keep being you. dehumidified.

more and more, yo! cool
serpico12
beautiful poetry sophia..one of my favourites reads..love the opening lines..

string me between space and time..that is exceptional ...great work as always...
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