Your smile makes me smile too The time I spend with you is precious We laugh together We cry together
You are my friend and I am yours We were meant to be together It was always meant to be this way And I wouldn't have it any other way
I love to hold you close and make you feel safe I love to feel your heart next to mine I love to kiss those tender lips I love to love you late at night
You and I will grow old together And remember our younger days You are the one that makes me happy I want it to always be this way
I just wish I could meet you I know you are out there, somewhere I don't know your name But I will know you when we meet
Do you dream of me too . . . . . ? The way I dream of you?
Very clever and well written .. drew me in right up until the end ...
Well done!
afreshstart48OPHull, East Riding of Yorkshire, England UKNov 21, 2010
Just me daydreaming again!
caroljoyceManchester, Greater Manchester, England UKNov 21, 2010
She most definitely does! Thankyou for sharing your passion and dreams with us, CJ
afreshstart48OPHull, East Riding of Yorkshire, England UKNov 23, 2010
thanks CJ, nice to hear from you.
pinkcoralNaha, Okinawa JapanNov 23, 2010
Dear afreshstart48, This is very touching your passion,how much caring your special. how precious moment is....this is unconditional love what we need. Thank you for sharing beatiful poem sir.
jeddah12singapore, Central Singapore SingaporeNov 23, 2010
I just wish I could meet you I know you are out there, somewhere I don't know your name But I will know you when we meet
excellent love poem and keep that dream alive
afreshstart48OPHull, East Riding of Yorkshire, England UKNov 23, 2010
Thanks jeddah, I'll try.
niah9Auckland, New ZealandNov 23, 2010
Hi afreshstart... You had me unsure whether you were telling about past or future....right till the end.... you've thought it through well, enjoyed the journey... hope she's waiting.....to be found soon.. Niah
afreshstart48OPHull, East Riding of Yorkshire, England UKNov 23, 2010
Glad you enjoyed it niah. I've never tried 'online dating' sites before but I thought "why not?" . . . if she IS out there, then maybe she's online
She's definitely there somewhere Waiting for your invitation online. Cause she needs what we need And you know what we need, All we need is a love forever.
paloma66Manukau, Auckland New ZealandNov 24, 2010
Do hope she's reading all that you write and soon flies to you.Good luck to you.
afreshstart48OPHull, East Riding of Yorkshire, England UKDec 18, 2010
Thanks for all your comments guys . . . still searching
Comments (13)
Well done!
CJ
This is very touching your passion,how much caring your special.
how precious moment is....this is unconditional love what we need.
Thank you for sharing beatiful poem sir.
I know you are out there, somewhere
I don't know your name
But I will know you when we meet
excellent love poem and keep that dream alive
You had me unsure whether you were telling about past or future....right till the end....
you've thought it through well, enjoyed the journey...
hope she's waiting.....to be found soon..
Niah
Truly,
Ginger
Waiting for your invitation online.
Cause she needs what we need
And you know what we need,
All we need is a love forever.