by Unknown
Jan 2011 319 Views 9 comments
john's rebirth
my planets have aligned forever i will finally shine.
i will show the world i have changed in this time.
im am new i am happy i am and will always be fine.
you may not believe that finally i have come alive.
but this is my chance to show the world mine.
thank you for letting me finally live my life.
my dream is real ill never stagger behind.
trust my my faith my heart and my mind.
i will show the world i have changed in this time.
im am new i am happy i am and will always be fine.
you may not believe that finally i have come alive.
but this is my chance to show the world mine.
thank you for letting me finally live my life.
my dream is real ill never stagger behind.
trust my my faith my heart and my mind.
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Jan 2011
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Comments (9)
Coupled with capital "I" and other capitals,
And commas, and other punctuation marks,
As well as willingness to use them properly in write.
Imagine, how they'll give your better chance,
Just think about it and write.
I like the way you have set this out, it makes your poems much easier to read and understand.
Best wishes
Fellsman