let me be the happiness you put in your arm. let me feel your heart as you breathe so calm. let me make you see things that are not there. let me be the only drug you ever take. when your done with me at least you'll be awake. so let me kiss you deadly my dear. with me there will be no fear. trust me there will be not even one care. if im the drug that makes you smile. then smile and be because im forever not just for alittle wile. im a great drug you see. it won't kill you so take me.
andrew149Southbourne, nr.Bournemouth, Dorset, England UKJan 24, 2011
Great metaphor John, Roxy Music did a song when I was a kid called Love is the drug, it reminded me of that, though it isn't the same of course.....thankyou....Andrew
SUMMIT09DALLAS, Texas USAJan 24, 2011
SOME TIMES HUMAN CONTACT CAN BE THE BEST DRUG PASS IT
Macduff5Newcastle, New South Wales AustraliaJan 24, 2011
Nicely done mate. Love is the drug and it's free and non toxic.
SCatlynBrecon, South Glamorgan, Wales UKJan 24, 2011
Great poem!
stillframeOPoklahoma city, Oklahoma USAJan 25, 2011
I like this a lot stillframe it's as though you have awoken from a long bad dream, and though remnants of the dream so strong still shape your every day thoughts, they are getting weaker as each day passes... who knows where your thoughts will take you next?
stillframeOPoklahoma city, Oklahoma USAJan 26, 2011
thanks my friend
online today!
niah9Auckland, New ZealandJan 26, 2011
Lovely ...stillframe....enjoyed and understood....Niah
stillframeOPoklahoma city, Oklahoma USAJan 26, 2011
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it's as though you have awoken from a
long bad dream, and though remnants of
the dream so strong still shape your
every day thoughts, they are getting
weaker as each day passes...
who knows where your thoughts will take
you next?
I'm impressed! nice write.....
Soph