watch me run untill i get up and go. like a holy rollercoaster but on the wrong boat. shall i grab my things as i walk out heavens door. but then i stop as my heart murmurs i fall to the floor. as i wake angels swarm around me in the sky. but wait what's this i got wings and i can fly. fly with the angels as i do. one day instead of me this will be you.
andrew149Southbourne, nr.Bournemouth, Dorset, England UKFeb 15, 2011
A good piece John, in my opinion...well written, a good read.....Andrew...
swade777Grants Pass Area, Oregon USAFeb 15, 2011
I wonder about those angel's wings John? As a strong believer myself, I think Hallmark and other card makers have had a big influence upon our thinking of angels! That aside... very creative imagery and still improving in your poetic skills my friend!!!
stillframeOPoklahoma city, Oklahoma USAFeb 15, 2011
thanks very much my friends this means alot to me
FellsmanLake District, Cumbria, England UKFeb 15, 2011
Good write...
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Fellsman
Lizard_PrinceBayamon, Puerto RicoFeb 15, 2011
Congradulations comrad....Hey! Do you got Holy angel blood in your veins as I do? Cool...Mistical atraction to the sacred Pal? Good try! I don't have the same luck for my poems guess the Lord calls me in other ways guess I will explore my recent talent profetise for Jesus.Well please keep in touch with me if that is your calling we may help God in more than one way.Keep up the good work.Your pal Lizard_Prince/Thunder1Angel
stillframeOPoklahoma city, Oklahoma USAFeb 15, 2011
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Fellsman