Kiss Me

by Freckles123Liverpool, Merseyside, England, UK

Feb 2011 889 Views 18 comments

Kiss Me

Kiss me
and I will fill your world
with rainbows

Kiss me
I will pick you
the sweetest flowers

Kiss me
I will place moonbeams
on your pillow

Kiss me
I will sing you
a love song

Kiss me
I will shower you
with the warmest rains

Kiss me
I will never leave......

~ ~ ~ ~ ~

Posted: Feb 2011

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Comments (18)

andrew149Southbourne, nr.Bournemouth, Dorset, England UKFeb 16, 2011

A beautiful poem Freckles, I really enjoyed reading it my friend....Thankyou.....Andrew...xxx

Freckles123OPLiverpool, Merseyside, England UKFeb 16, 2011

Thank you Andrew, your words always mean a lot

grandadKilmorna, Kerry IrelandFeb 16, 2011

Try as I may I find it difficult to express feelings with words yet a 'simple' poem like this so full of feelings in a way I would give anything to capture.
I love it young lady, beautiful!!

FellsmanLake District, Cumbria, England UKFeb 16, 2011

Hi Freckles

My word - who could resist an offer like that, and so eloquently written.

Best wishes

Bill

Freckles123OPLiverpool, Merseyside, England UKFeb 16, 2011

Thanks Bill, your words are much appreciated

pilgrimageofloveSydney, New South Wales AustraliaFeb 17, 2011

Freckles

Never knew there was so much in a kiss!
Beautiful poetry.

boyshchrm6barrie, Ontario CanadaFeb 17, 2011

A most passionate kiss i am sure.

agoodguy2havesuffolk, Virginia USAFeb 17, 2011

Freckles123, I think all the guys agree and would be happy to oblige. ;-)

Macduff5Newcastle, New South Wales AustraliaFeb 17, 2011

Freckles...you promise...that's all I have to do to get those lovely things?

thesunandtheseaTampa, Florida USAFeb 17, 2011

OMG)))))))

Where have I been, why I missed this one?? >_</// This is SSS poem!! short, simple and sweeeeeeeet )))) I love this kind of poem so so so very much ))))

I wish I could write like this!!!

Yeahhh

just a kiss... 1000000 sweet words are not worth than a kiss.

BIG THANKS for writing this!!!! Simply lovely absolutely SWEET)))

^__________^

thesunandtheseaTampa, Florida USAFeb 17, 2011

Kiss me
and I will fill your world
with rainbows

Kiss me
I will pick you
the sweetest flowers

Kiss me
I will place moonbeams
on your pillow

A power of a kiss!! Nothing is impossible if you kiss me! awwwwwwwwww

Without a kiss, your world would never has a rainbow,
Without a kiss, you have to pick a lil flower by your own,
Without a kiss, you will never have a pillow to hold.

LOL see A Power of a KISS!

Freckles123OPLiverpool, Merseyside, England UKFeb 17, 2011

Thank you Pilgrim for your kind words, much appreciated.
Freckles

Freckles123OPLiverpool, Merseyside, England UKFeb 17, 2011

Boyscharm and Goodguy....
Thank you both so much for your comments, as always they mean a lot..
Freckles

Freckles123OPLiverpool, Merseyside, England UKFeb 17, 2011

Hi sunandsea, thanks so much for your lovely words, much appreciated

swade777Grants Pass Area, Oregon USAFeb 17, 2011

Ever since joining the Army, seems all I've done is stand in lines! Now... here I am again! Why couldn't I have gotten here first???????? Are there any kisses left? You're AMAZING in so many ways!!!

Freckles123OPLiverpool, Merseyside, England UKFeb 17, 2011

Swade..... I am saving the "sweetest" kiss just for you my friend

Thank you for your lovely words, they mean a lot..
Freckles

gnj4uBoston, Massachusetts USAFeb 17, 2011

Hi, Freckles123,
There is much power in a kiss when it comes from the one loved. Rainbows... flowers... moonbeams... song... What more could he want but a kiss in return! A very sweet write!

Freckles123OPLiverpool, Merseyside, England UKFeb 18, 2011

Thanks gnj4u, your words are much appreciated...
Freckles

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