Come With Me

by Freckles123Liverpool, Merseyside, England, UK

May 2011 643 Views 15 comments

Come With Me..

Come a little closer
Feel my warm breath, on your cheek,
Taste the sweetness of my kiss
Let my soft lips, leave you weak.
Lose yourself in the moment
As passion, stokes its flames,
Yield to raw abandonment
As fire, courses through your veins.
Come with me, on a journey
Where ecstasy will unfold,
And at the final destination
Experience, feelings yet untold...

~ ~ ~ ~ ~

Posted: May 2011

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Comments (15)

DaBomb72Mantova, Lombardy ItalyMay 30, 2011

Passionate poem. Ups and downs between surface and deep daring. Nice writing, Freckles !

DaBomb72Mantova, Lombardy ItalyMay 30, 2011

Freckles...

boyshchrm6barrie, Ontario CanadaMay 30, 2011

Very seducing Freckles. Thank you...I think.

Freckles123OPLiverpool, Merseyside, England UKMay 30, 2011

Boyscharm..
Thank you for your comment.. as always it is much appreciated.. glad you enjoyed the read.... or maybe not..

Freckles

Yankee4youSt. Albans, Vermont USAMay 30, 2011

A very sensual write...Freckles....an almost Siren like quality to it.....who can resist? :)

Freckles123OPLiverpool, Merseyside, England UKJun 7, 2011

Yankee4u
Thanks for your comment, much appreciated, glad you enjoyed it.
Freckles

kickit22auburn, Washington USAJun 8, 2011

i'd say this poem had me in flames. very sensual write.

for you freckles. kickit.

trurorobAlicante, Valencia SpainJun 8, 2011

you shouldnt be single its a waste of great emotions!
rob

Freckles123OPLiverpool, Merseyside, England UKJun 10, 2011

Kickit..
Thanks for your comment, much appreciated, hope you're a little cooler now

Glad you enjoyed the read.
Freckles

Freckles123OPLiverpool, Merseyside, England UKJun 10, 2011

SaS..
Thanks so much for your sweet comment, I too hope that, if you give your heart again, it will be to someone who loves you very much, as you are a lovely sweet person... glad you enjoyed the poem.
Freckles