IF

by Freckles123Liverpool, Merseyside, England, UK

Feb 2011 818 Views 15 comments

IF.......

If.. I give you my heart
will you, dream me a dream
and paint me a rainbow too.

If.. I give you my heart
will you shower my world
with, the scent of the sweet morning dew.

If.. I give you my heart
will you walk by my side
as we laugh, holding hands in the rain.

If.. I give you my heart
will you, love and protect it
and shield it from sorrow and pain.....

~ ~ ~ ~ ~

Posted: Feb 2011

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andrew149Southbourne, nr.Bournemouth, Dorset, England UKFeb 17, 2011

Ahhhh....it just gets better and better...so well written Freckles, love this one too....Andrew...xxx

swade777Grants Pass Area, Oregon USAFeb 17, 2011

If I had your trusted heart
I'd want to do all that and more
as to be trusted with your heart
is a trust I'd never ignore!

But..... to whom will your heart be given? That's up to you!

gnj4uBoston, Massachusetts USAFeb 17, 2011

Hi, Freckles123,
What lovely sentiment. and shield it from sorrow and pain..... If only love could do this, too, as it wraps one in comforting arms!

Freckles123OPLiverpool, Merseyside, England UKFeb 18, 2011

Andrew, thank you so much for your words, they, as always, mean a lot... glad you liked it
Freckles

Freckles123OPLiverpool, Merseyside, England UKFeb 18, 2011

Thank you swade, your comment was lovely, love the write... means a lot....
Freckles

Freckles123OPLiverpool, Merseyside, England UKFeb 18, 2011

gnj4u, thanks for your words, glad you like it,
Freckles

FellsmanLake District, Cumbria, England UKFeb 18, 2011

Very romantic, Miss Freckles - bit of a shame your latest poems were not posted on Valentine's day....

Asking all the right questions too.

Regards

Bill

Freckles123OPLiverpool, Merseyside, England UKFeb 18, 2011

Why thank you Bill,your words are much appreciated...... guess I'm a closet romantic underneath this tough exterior eh

Freckles

Macduff5Newcastle, New South Wales AustraliaFeb 18, 2011

Ah...the romantic if....such persuasive and lovely sentiment.

christian22cardiff, Mid Glamorgan, Wales UKFeb 19, 2011

really lovely poem you have written..like the line...will you dream me a dream..clever..

DivinitymagicStirling, Central, Scotland UKFeb 19, 2011

Wow, thats a wonderful and beautiful poem :-)

Freckles123OPLiverpool, Merseyside, England UKFeb 21, 2011

Christian... thanks for your comment, glad you liked it.. hope someone will dream a dream for you....
Freckles

Freckles123OPLiverpool, Merseyside, England UKFeb 21, 2011

Hi Divinitymagic... thanks for your words, much appreciated..
Freckles

Yankee4youSt. Albans, Vermont USAApr 1, 2011

Something very sensual about holding hands in the rain...walking like there is no hurry in the world.....the colors are more vivid when water pools into shining reflective puddles. C

Freckles123OPLiverpool, Merseyside, England UKApr 6, 2011

Yankee4you... glad you enjoyed the read, thanks..

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