wrestling with my emotions

time to walk on water and breathe gently.
as the cold gets stronger.i am but im not.
im always pushing myself i am a mystery.
am i happy am i sad who will ever know.
and in my confusion theirs only one conclusion.
that i can't even if i tried to control my emotions.
so for now ill walk on this water head held high.
and gently say for now this is goodbye.
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Posted: Feb 2011
About this poem:
something we all have problems with

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Comments (8)

swade777
Stillframe... sounds like another attempt to bail out on us! Don't you dare do that! I've enjoyed the improvement of your writing skills like a father enjoys the growth of his children before his very face!! I'm not claiming any personal DNA connection to your poetry, but I'm always watching out for ya!!! Keep it coming!!!
stillframe
no im here just a poem that's been stuck in my gut to get out thanks
andrew149
Yep I know that feeling too....and as far as the poem is concerned, if it's in there, it has to come out....well done...a difficult subject....Andrew...cool
moonlight31
if only i can do the same
good write applause
agoodguy2have
still, i too must acknowledge that your poems are definitely growing, and expressing those emotions better all the time. well done. ;-)
stillframe
thanks very much my friends
Macduff5
Nice one Stillframe..very much from the heart. thumbs up
gnj4u
Hi, stillframe,
Yes, sometimes it feels as if life demands that we walk on water in order to survive! breathe gently sounds like a good plan as your poem is wrestling with my emotions!
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