time to walk on water and breathe gently. as the cold gets stronger.i am but im not. im always pushing myself i am a mystery. am i happy am i sad who will ever know. and in my confusion theirs only one conclusion. that i can't even if i tried to control my emotions. so for now ill walk on this water head held high. and gently say for now this is goodbye.
Stillframe... sounds like another attempt to bail out on us! Don't you dare do that! I've enjoyed the improvement of your writing skills like a father enjoys the growth of his children before his very face!! I'm not claiming any personal DNA connection to your poetry, but I'm always watching out for ya!!! Keep it coming!!!
stillframeOPoklahoma city, Oklahoma USAFeb 16, 2011
no im here just a poem that's been stuck in my gut to get out thanks
andrew149Southbourne, nr.Bournemouth, Dorset, England UKFeb 17, 2011
Yep I know that feeling too....and as far as the poem is concerned, if it's in there, it has to come out....well done...a difficult subject....Andrew...
Hi, stillframe, Yes, sometimes it feels as if life demands that we walk on water in order to survive! breathe gently sounds like a good plan as your poem is wrestling with my emotions!
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good write
Yes, sometimes it feels as if life demands that we walk on water in order to survive! breathe gently sounds like a good plan as your poem is wrestling with my emotions!