Precocious Love

by Yankee4youSt. Albans, Vermont, USA

Oct 2011 729 Views 9 comments

Precocious Love

Like precious flowers
Before a magnolia leafing
Love could not avoid
such furious passion bleating
With boundless energy
The heart of a cheetah
I met a goddess from
The plains of Machida
Her eyes were shining
Like dark green sapphires
Her voice flowing notes
Like the sound of a lyre
Her thick hair raven black
Falling to her knees
Her beauty beyond any
Searching all seven seas
She made me weak
My lust so atrocious
Feeling my heart
Beating so ferocious

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Posted: Oct 2011

About this poem:

Romantic fantasy (I'm bored tonight)

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Comments (9)

AyhraAdelaide, South Australia AustraliaOct 24, 2011

You should be bored more often (lol) Because this is very nice Yankee4u

Lavender_BlueBirmingham, West Midlands, England UKOct 24, 2011

Am..az..in..g!!

cafetwo2010Harford county, Maryland USAOct 24, 2011

Superb Yank..'How about we take a bus to the plains of Machida. She has to be out there somewhere.

lucy777gunbarrel city, Texas USAOct 24, 2011

wow I wish I could write like this when I am bored, nice work!

Odette67Penrith, Cumbria, England UKOct 25, 2011

My word Yankee dearest you need to be bored more often...my kind of poem this one.

FellsmanLake District, Cumbria, England UKOct 25, 2011

Hi Yankee

You poetry is rapidly becoming "A must read" here on 'The Corner'. This is a superbly written declaration of love making full use of romantic metaphor.

I just love this...

Bill