I'm hanging on your thoughts...

1.
You're hiding your world,
You're scared of your breath.
Your eyes are so cold,
Your mind got to mess.

You shoot at the sky
To kill some odd cloud.
Your tears are so dry,
Your thoughts are so loud!

Chr:
I'm living in your heart,
I'm flowing with your words,
I brought you to the start
But probably it hurts.

I'm hanging on your thoughts
To take away your pain.
I've kept for us two boats,
Should we escape in vain?

2.
You're hiding your hands,
Your gloves are so tight.
You leave your demands
To plunge into the night.

You wait for the flight...
When darkness comes here
You're shining so bright,
Excited with fear.

Chr:
I'm living in your heart,
I'm flowing with your words,
I brought you to the start
But probably it hurts.

I'm hanging on your thoughts
To take away your pain.
I've kept for us two boats,
Should we escape in vain

To come back here some day?..
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Aug 2009

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sabeel
dear poet, Iiris.
i am sure that you are right...
nice words and thoughts.
sabeel.teddybear
Iiris
Dear Sabeel,

Thank you so much, I always appreciate your reading and commenting my poems :) angel
Galatea
Good written, it could be a song.
gypsyheart
Very beautiful and sensitive poem Iiris-keep on sharing your poetryhug teddybear
Iiris
Thank you dear Gypsyheart, I'm also waiting for your new poems :)
Iiris
Dear Galatea, you can't believe but I was really singing this poem in my mind while writing :))
poetengineer
very beautiful poem , as always u have beautiful words to share , thanks for u
Iiris
Thank you for such a nice words handshake angel
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