You can never climb the stairs to his heart if the boards are broken. You shall find love beyond when you let go of the shadows of the past... A good, sad poem my dear young lady...John
wisemandyBudapest, Central Hungary HungaryJun 16, 2009
Hi, let me join the fan club. :-)
Your poems are pretty and filled with real emotions.
I like this one the most.
Keep posting.
Gabor (Budapest, Hungary)
IirisOPEspoo, Southern Finland FinlandJun 16, 2009
Thanks for pleasant words and advice :)
Sam1979Espoo, Southern Finland FinlandJun 17, 2009
I am impressed !!!
IirisOPEspoo, Southern Finland FinlandJun 17, 2009
Oh, yeah... there is something that you didn't know about me that i have this weakness to write poems :)
aussieguy41melbourne, Victoria AustraliaJun 17, 2009
Hi writing poems is not a weakness it is putting your feelings and emotions into words to have the courage to do so is a strength not a weakness keep writing and take care....
IirisOPEspoo, Southern Finland FinlandJun 17, 2009
Thanks! Now I know that I'm a strong one... at least in writing :)
Sam1979Espoo, Southern Finland FinlandJun 18, 2009
I have to say it is a great 'weakness' to have, I suppose there is lot more to you than I know but I am glad I know one more..... keep it coming.
nanajujual ain, Abu Dhabi United Arab EmiratesJun 18, 2009
a very good piece, I loved it, keep going
IirisOPEspoo, Southern Finland FinlandJun 18, 2009
Thank to you all, you give me a strenght and sense to keep writing :)
BOBANBOBANPozarevac City, Central Serbia SerbiaJun 18, 2009
Guess what.......am imprest....again
IirisOPEspoo, Southern Finland FinlandJun 19, 2009
It was hard to guess :)
BOBANBOBANPozarevac City, Central Serbia SerbiaJun 19, 2009
ok...lets face it....i only know a few words on English
IirisOPEspoo, Southern Finland FinlandJun 23, 2009
GalateaTallinn, Harjumaa EstoniaAug 16, 2009
Good written!
IirisOPEspoo, Southern Finland FinlandAug 16, 2009
Comments (19)
Your poems are pretty and filled with real emotions.
I like this one the most.
Keep posting.
Gabor
(Budapest, Hungary)
Now I know that I'm a strong one... at least in writing :)
I'm just happy that those words could touch you :)