The Orange Good and The White Sun_3

I looked at the sun.
It was the same white.
And suddenly I imagined the whole Universe with the white sun in the middle and a little orange Good that was jumping from one planet to another.
And the whole Universe was its home.

It has been many years since the Good left me, but I'm still waiting for it.
Maybe it will come back...
Not forever...
I know it can't live in our world...
But just for a while, to see each other.
And I look at the white sun, and I hear its whispering: “Wait, wait... wait...”
And I ask for how long should I wait, but it just repeats: “Wait, wait... wait...”
And something ugly hides from me the white sun...
It's hanging and laughing in the clouds.
And I'm pretty sure that the Good will come back.
It won't forget me.
But what if it can't find my house or my city?
When I think of it I feel so cold and scared.
It might be that a little orange Good is walking now somewhere on this planet.
So, if you meet it, please say that I'm missing my little friend.
Perhaps, it doesn't know what it is “to miss”, but it doesn't matter.
It will ask you: “What is missing?”, and maybe the white sun will smile and become yellow again.

Kiev,
2003
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Posted: Nov 2009

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jazzy75
Iiris - I enjoyed your poem and story :-) It was riveting...couldn't wait for you to post the last segment. Thank you for a great readhug
Iiris
Dear Jazzy,

Thank you for the comment, I'm happy that you enjoyed this story :) handshake
andrew149
thankyou....... enjoyed reading this story.......andrew....xxx
sabeel
dear poet friend Iiris,
it is so happy to read your poem again...
i enjoyed your poem ...

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Iiris
Thank you guys!
Nice to meet you all here again, it has been a while since I visited here :)
cheers
Galatea
Such a warm story, brings back to a childhood :)
Witchaywoman
That was cute!
Iiris
Thank you all for the comments :)
I did really want to write something warm :)
gypsyheart
Beautiful poem Iiris.Very artistically expressed-i love itapplause hug bouquet
Neostylites
A very nice poem; thanks for sharing it.
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Utpal
Hey Iris fantastic poetry....i really praise u
Utpal
Hey Iris fantastic poetry....i really praise u
Iiris
Thank you my friends for such a nice words, it's always my pleasure to share :) handshake cheers
Redex
A lovely read , read a few times thankyou for sharingteddybear
Iiris
Thank you!
Even few times :)
That is the best what this story could get :) handshake
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