You were flying...

You were some blue bird,
You were flying
Between happyness and destiny.
You were thinking
To wind up with dew
To heaven…

You were white ghost,
You were flying
Over the sun!
You were touching
Something
In dense smoke…

You were screaming
With white thirst
For exhausted Earth.
You were dreaming
That some day
You will stop to be a soul.

25.06.2009
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Posted: Jun 2009

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sabeel
hi, Iiris,
handshake yes offcourse, thats true.everyone wish to fly high.
good , go on, you may hit the top...
only the special one gets the ability to write powerfully.
thank you.
sabeel.
Iiris
Thank you! handshake
By the way, I have tried to fly in my childhood, unfortunately it hasn't worked :)))
sabeel
hi, Iiris,
if any like to fly , there is no limit to fly, shy is high, no one can stop you.
no age, limit.
the matter is how much you wish...
i think , many times , a flying scene comes in your dreams...
go on , you can....gift
sabeel.heart wings
writer
Hiheart wings Iris, I dont know how can give you Thanks...Your thoughts are nice and meaningfull. Go ahead and write as a blue bird.......I expect your great success in life...take care...Bye..L...R...
CHILLICHOW
hi iris! besides a beautiful thought you have shared with us, you too are a very beautiful lady! All the best to you.
Sam1979
and yet again another one........ great ,keep it up!applause
Iiris
Thank to everybody!
I'm pretty sure that all of you could fly at least once in the life :)
angel
prasan
hi respected you,
Actually i am realy appreciate you and. wish you all the best for future. As well as would like to convey with honestly you are calling eminent feeling with others heart.

Thanks.
Prasan
kingolo4401
Hi Angel Iiris yes my blue bird
and I 'm flying if you want hand down blushing
Later together flying heaven
angel
ooo love my hearth
Iiris
It seems that you are answering me with poetry...
You must be a poet as well! handshake thumbs up
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