Im poisoned

by Unknown

Jun 2009 790 Views 13 comments

I'm poisoned

Author: Unknown

I'm dying,
I'm poisoned
With darkness,
With crowd!

I'm trying
To whisper
But shouting
So loud!

I'm hiding -
I'm found!
I'm praying
To you...

I'm dying,
I'm poisoned,
I'm poisoned
With you!

Forgive me
I'm flying
To you
In your dreams...

I'm witch...
No, I'm poisoned
With distance,
With sting!

I'm dying,
I'm poisoned
With waiting,
With time...

I'm dying,
I'm poisoned,
I need you
To survive...

17.04.2009

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Posted: Jun 2009

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Comments (13)

johnnyboemilford, Connecticut USAJun 17, 2009

Iris,
Such a bittersweet poem, Your deep and inner thoughts bring much to poetry. You express yourself within a valley of words, young and unpretentious are you Lady Fair..Good writing

IirisOPEspoo, Southern Finland FinlandJun 17, 2009

I'm glad that it's touching you... that I was able to share my feelings :)
Thanks!

johnnyboemilford, Connecticut USAJun 17, 2009

By sharing you become one with yourself and vent out to release that compassion and humility..thank you for sharing and giving to others a feeling of aw

turnip73houston, Texas USAJun 17, 2009

awesome, thanx for the great read!!!

IirisOPEspoo, Southern Finland FinlandJun 17, 2009

I have to say thanks for such a nice readers, I appriciate every your opinion :)

BOBANBOBANPozarevac City, Central Serbia SerbiaJun 17, 2009

Am imprest...bravo