...Just hurry up!

Just look at me,
I came from madness
To bring a wisdom
To this crazy world!

Just fall to me
With thunder
From the spring sky,
And burn the happiness!

Just turn me on,
Probably I’m dying
Being fallen
So deeply…

Just fly with me,
I’m enchanted by future!
I’m leaving from the past!
I’m yours…
Just hurry up!

8.04.2009
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Posted: Jun 2009

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johnnyboe
A deep powerful piece young lady, remember, yesterday is gone, today we live the best we can, and tomorrow does not belong to anyone..You write with great conviction and character..John
zooboy
Your poem is well written and very good. To me the poem is about as follows ....

You are waiting for the love of your life. You have been through everything you feel life can throw at you and now feel its time for god, destiny or fate, too now reveal the man of your dreams. You have suffered pain and have learned truths about yourself because of the pain. You now wish to give all of your being and all of your love too this man, but you want him to hurry up or you want destiny or(god(s) to hurry up. I'm sure he will be along soon lol.

Best regards,

Rae
Iiris
Dear Rae,

Good description, thanks!
I would memorize it for "him" :)))
Galatea
He should be the one who deserves those feelings.
Iiris
I think so...
But he should hurry up :)))
gypsyheart
I like your positive & beautiful affirmation to yourself in your last verse and "leaving from the past"...am sure he will find you soon-you such a beautiful girl Iiris.Thank you for sharinghug
Iiris
Dear Gypsyheart,

Thank you so much for such a nice words handshake hug
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