A deep powerful piece young lady, remember, yesterday is gone, today we live the best we can, and tomorrow does not belong to anyone..You write with great conviction and character..John
zooboyGalway, IrelandAug 15, 2009
Your poem is well written and very good. To me the poem is about as follows ....
You are waiting for the love of your life. You have been through everything you feel life can throw at you and now feel its time for god, destiny or fate, too now reveal the man of your dreams. You have suffered pain and have learned truths about yourself because of the pain. You now wish to give all of your being and all of your love too this man, but you want him to hurry up or you want destiny or(god(s) to hurry up. I'm sure he will be along soon lol.
Best regards,
Rae
IirisOPEspoo, Southern Finland FinlandAug 16, 2009
Dear Rae,
Good description, thanks! I would memorize it for "him" :)))
GalateaTallinn, Harjumaa EstoniaAug 16, 2009
He should be the one who deserves those feelings.
IirisOPEspoo, Southern Finland FinlandAug 16, 2009
I think so... But he should hurry up :)))
gypsyheartSouth coast of KwaZulu Natal, KwaZulu-Natal South AfricaAug 27, 2009
I like your positive & beautiful affirmation to yourself in your last verse and "leaving from the past"...am sure he will find you soon-you such a beautiful girl Iiris.Thank you for sharing
IirisOPEspoo, Southern Finland FinlandAug 28, 2009
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You are waiting for the love of your life. You have been through everything you feel life can throw at you and now feel its time for god, destiny or fate, too now reveal the man of your dreams. You have suffered pain and have learned truths about yourself because of the pain. You now wish to give all of your being and all of your love too this man, but you want him to hurry up or you want destiny or(god(s) to hurry up. I'm sure he will be along soon lol.
Best regards,
Rae
Good description, thanks!
I would memorize it for "him" :)))
But he should hurry up :)))
Thank you so much for such a nice words