She's lucky, she has now a loving heart to save her tears, which she will shed no more. She will have a wall to support her so that she doesn't fall. I wish she truly appreciates all the benefits that befell her. Good write and lovely, lovely sentiments indeed. True love I would call it. Thank you.
La_LunaHamilton, Waikato New ZealandApr 5, 2011
Wow what a beautiful poem. I felt my heart beating a little faster as I was reading that
Your very talented Jim, don't stop
jeddah12singapore, Central Singapore SingaporeApr 5, 2011
what a very touching words and what a romantic poet you are sir,,that was awesome::thumbsup: anyone who dont love that poem must be someone who dont know whats love and i love this piece of work from you sir...thanks for sharing it....kudos
Swan87Syria, QatarApr 5, 2011
Very HeartFelt Write !! I loved it !
" Don't want to see you spend life alone
Sitting on your bed Waiting by the phone "
Swan
andrew149Southbourne, nr.Bournemouth, Dorset, England UKApr 5, 2011
Thankyou Cafe....a lot of sentiment here, a good read....Andrew...
very lovely and spiritual poem..Thanks for sharing
christian22cardiff, Mid Glamorgan, Wales UKApr 5, 2011
hi cafetwo2010, this is good, full of caring thoughts, compassion, very well written and a first rate poem, all of us can identify with some part..
cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAApr 10, 2011
Thank you Mr. Christian..Always a pleasure. I've been down some rather rough paths in my life, seeing life from many angles. And I've seen a great deal of good in people so I try to blend the right sentiments with a reasonable degree of clarity. My scripture study has enabled me to connect with universal themes.
cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAJul 18, 2016
It made the same impression on me as when I first read it, no difference, as if time never passed. Another proof that true poetry and sentiments never age. Very kind of you, Cafe, to remind us of it, thank you!
cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAJul 18, 2016
marikia..
Thank you sweet.. I'd like all the great poets on here to bring their old stuff back. It's like listening to an old song. They really never get old. Mabey I am something of a poet. But even if I'm not, you all have made me feel like Shakespere.lol Cafe
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Your very talented Jim, don't stop
" Don't want to
see you spend
life alone
Sitting on your
bed
Waiting by
the phone "
Swan
Cafe
Thank you sweet.. I'd like all the great
poets on here to bring their old stuff
back. It's like listening to an old song.
They really never get old. Mabey I am
something of a poet. But even if I'm not,
you all have made me feel like Shakespere.lol
Cafe
Kathy
I sure love 'the you of days gone by'.
Beautiful and heartfelt write.
Mady
Perhaps you're not loved completely in the way you would like to be ~ BUT YOU ARE LOVED BY MANY !!!!!!!
Mady