Forever night

by cafetwo2010Harford county, Maryland, USA

Apr 2011 1,031 Views 9 comments

Forever night..

Author: cafetwo2010

O sun, stand
still..

Grant me her
love

In eternal
night..

~ ~ ~ ~ ~

Posted: Apr 2011

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jeddah12singapore, Central Singapore SingaporeApr 6, 2011

and where is the moon & the stars , jim??

(kidding)
short but full of meanings,,,nice one sir

cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAApr 6, 2011

Well, jeddah dear, for the sun it was just a request. But for the moon and stars I had to cut a more shady deal.lol. You know how stubborn a trillion glaxies can get when they're made to wait. Just like the ladies.

niah9Auckland, New ZealandApr 6, 2011

I wonder Cafetwo...is this for real or make believe?...Niah

cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAApr 7, 2011

Thanks niah. Poetic make believe dear. Just poetry.

FellsmanLake District, Cumbria, England UKApr 7, 2011

Ah Cafe

Your heartfelt plea to Helios in less than a dozen words, oh that I could write so succinctly with such brevity.

Cheers

Bill

cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAApr 7, 2011

Thank you mr.Fellsman. I have no doubt. You could write any way you choose. Top of the day to you my friend..

marikiaTbilisi, GeorgiaApr 7, 2011

So that stars and Moon, their shepherd, and all the heavens indeed could stand in awe at your love, and maybe if your voice is heard up there she will be here with you in the eternal bliss of night. In just a few words so much said.

cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAApr 7, 2011

A beautiful addition to that thought marikia.. Thank you

cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAApr 7, 2011

A beautiful addition to that thought marikia.. Thank you

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