Hi, cafetwo2010, What a nice opening stanza and a lovely write!
petalblossomsSydney, New South Wales AustraliaJun 7, 2011
WOW!!! Short but so visual.A beauty.
cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAJun 7, 2011
Cool niah.. But remember..the moon is mostly a guy thing.We need her as a metaphor for the ladies.We've already given you the sun and stars and now you want..Oh,No! You're Moon Diggers!lol.
cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAJun 7, 2011
TY gnj..' The fist stanza just popped into my mind. I had no choice but to go with it.
cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAJun 7, 2011
Thank you Petals..' I'm happy with the way this one fell together.
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What a nice opening stanza and a lovely write!
Beautiful write Cafetwo!
The moon indeed is beautiful and to compare her to a woman is a very nice notion.
Kathy