Within my dreams of tortured screams and memories of long ago I watched the act denied as fact and pursued her through the snow.
And in this dream to me it seems as though im almost dead when Im ripped apart and fed my heart to awake upon my bed.
The dreams of night with fists clenched tight had followed me once again and all my fears wet my pillow with tears as I expect the end.
Never before was I so bold as when I tell you this. The fear of death and the reapers breath are as comforting as a lovers kiss.
I wipe at my eye not willing to cry must keep my sanity intact little did I know it was because of the snow that kept me from attack.
I stand and scream shattering all things that happen to be in the room the voice in my head starts whispering instead the end is coming soon.
I stand at the window feeling the wind blow through the broken glass I cut my feet climbing into the street to fulfill my morbid task.
I land in the lawn hours before dawn listening to the voices the demons around retreat from my sound so I stop to consider my choices.
I head for the trees scraping my knees because of the briers around my rage intact as a matter of fact cruel suggestions and self doubt abound.
A clearing in the forest filled with chorus by the evil thats out tonight a circle of Satan strengthened through hating is witnessed under crisp moonlight.
In the middle of the night Im turned on by the sight at the scene taking place before me levitating in air with blood streaked hair is an angelic symbol of mercy.
Raped and beaten at this occultic meeting she begs for sudden death but the seed shes received guarantees shell conceive for the righteous theres never rest.
Wow! Great story telling....you've got my attention
crickit2626OPSophia, North Carolina USAJun 17, 2011
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swade777Grants Pass Area, Oregon USAJun 17, 2011
David, I appreciate your personal contact with me and the introduction in that contact to this newly posted piece. 'Dark' it is, I won't argue that point, but certainly not without talent worth recognition and praise!!
Now, to answer your personal e-mail. Terrific write Mr. Hill!!
"The dreams of night with fists clenched tight had followed me once again and all my tears wet my pillow with tears as I expect the end."
I wonder if line 4 was intended to be... "and all my FEARS" instead of TEARS? I think it would have made for a better stanza.
crickit2626OPSophia, North Carolina USAJun 17, 2011
yes ... very good catch. and that is certainly what I meant to have wrote instead. javascript:emot('');
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Now, to answer your personal e-mail. Terrific write Mr. Hill!!
"The dreams of night
with fists clenched tight
had followed me once again
and all my tears
wet my pillow with tears
as I expect the end."
I wonder if line 4 was intended to be... "and all my FEARS" instead of TEARS? I think it would have made for a better stanza.