All I have is time And an empty exsitence To occupy my mind
All I have are empty spaces Lining the walls with a few chosen faces
Will I ever be Anything But lonely
Will I ever feel loved again Like the morning sun shining my face Or will I die alone In my own dark and cold embrace
Will I ever silence the noise in my head Can I ever escape that screaming Will I ever speak out loud again As if I'm talking to another human being
Is it worth hoping that I'll find a friend Is it worth waiting to see the outcome in the end Or should I never open my eyes so I can't see That the only thing I'll ever have is me
Great stuff my friend, you have a tremendous poetic ability sometimes I would love to see that channelled elsewhere. Rob
manroe23indonesia, Jakarta IndonesiaJul 23, 2011
It's good one eric
MALRO13Dandenong, Victoria AustraliaJul 23, 2011
In the words of JF "ask not if you'll be loved but if you will get the chance to love again". Nice work ecm the sad thing is that there are a million people with the same frame of mind...imagine if we all met in a field somewhere with the sun shining and.....oh well!!! nice thought
Thank you, I wrote it for those millions to find for themselves, there is "only me" in which you must first love yourself to love another to in turn be loved back, it's not so much about me as it is the friends in my life. Where would you like to see it channeled to Rob? I could put forth the effort if I had a direction
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Rob