My poetry is in her eyes

by cafetwo2010Harford county, Maryland, USA

Sep 2011 614 Views 10 comments

My poetry is in her eyes..

Author: cafetwo2010

My poetry is in your eyes..
I gave my pen to a rainbow
and it wrote the colors of
your smile accross the heavens
I let the dove and the raven
rest in the palm of your hand
and they sang a song so sweet
The golden leaves of autumn
produced the colors that spoke
of you as a love child of the
earth
My poetry..fell from your lips
when you said..'I love you~

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Posted: Sep 2011

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FellsmanLake District, Cumbria, England UKSep 22, 2011

Hi Cafe

A most romantic write: I think it's great that we older guys are the living proof that the arrows from Cupid's bow are not directed exclusively in the direction of the young (Of course, like you I think young).

An enjoyable read...

Best wishes

Bill

cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USASep 22, 2011

Ty Mr. Fellsman..Romance never dies..The older we get the more intense those feelings can become..

EarlgreyteaLimassol, CyprusSep 22, 2011

[I gave my pen to a rainbow
and it wrote the colors of
your smile accross the heavens]

now this, is poetry, nuff said...

boyshchrm6barrie, Ontario CanadaSep 22, 2011

Wonderful poem CafeTwo. Look out for the stampede.
This must win over a few fair maidens.

cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USASep 22, 2011

Ty Earl..Sometimes if a good line pops in my head I have to find a poem to fit it. It's almost a must..Thank you my friend..

cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USASep 22, 2011

Ty boyshchrm6..They said most of the maidens were up on the forth floor of the castle with you..but that's cool..Another bus load of maidens will appear shortly.

Happygolucky4uTreasure Coast, Florida USASep 22, 2011

I love it. From the title to the end.

cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USASep 22, 2011

Ty..Happygolucky..' You make a knight blush as he shines his armour..

cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USASep 22, 2011

Ty..Itch..' Ahh..Another trembling maiden who must be comforted with a pony tail and a red ribbon..

marikiaTbilisi, GeorgiaNov 24, 2016

This I suppose deserves to be brought to everyone's attention again! "My poetry is in your eyes!" Very well done, dear poet! Here is to your Muse, Cafe!

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