A Fitful Gift of Perfume

The flowery scent evaporates swiftly,
Joyfully disperses out of the iridescent flask.
Transparent, azure glass.
Each day as the sun comes out,
Breaking through the morning mists,
With each tiny spray - there is less -
And as it slowly disappears
Something inside me dries out and dies out.
The drunken talk of love, a meaningless affection;
One day the flask will empty
And the spell will vanish.

It’s still half-full. But
The inside storm warns me,
To spill the contents down the marble sink.
Let them travel far,
Further than my heart -
For I’ve had enough of the cursed scent.
Let someone else possess the fitful gift of perfume,
A fitful gift of love.
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Posted: Feb 2012
About this poem:
The Perfume in the poem was a Christmas gift from someone who meant alot to me at the time but things changed over short period of time - ironically, they changed in the same pace as the volume of perfume in the flask.

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elo69
It is an interesting metaphor

With each tiny spray - there is less -
And as it slowly disappears
Something inside me dries out and dies out.
The drunken talk of love, a meaningless affection;
One day the flask will empty
And the spell will vanish.

very well written....elo..wave
mcradloff
I have gotten gifts from girls of past and who are no longer in my life. Perfume would be a tough one to use after the relationship is gone. I always appreciate any gift I have gotten, even if the person who gave it is a scoudrel.doh heart wings
Fellsman
Hi xxvixx


This is a really good allegorical write - emptying the contents of that perfume flask down the sink was definitely a decisive move...


Enjoyed the read.

Bill wine wine
ReaderOfSouls
Wonderfully written, Vix!! thumbs up thumbs up

I *LOVE* the allegory that the perfume and flask represent. wine bouquet

How I remember those dating days and being gifted with a scent that meant much to the young man. The memory of the broken relationship and how they change so quickly and the wanting to change the scent so that the memory does not linger.
Maxeen_1
A Fitful Gift of Perfume
by: xxVixx
It’s still half-full. But
The inside storm warns me,
To spill the contents down the marble sink.
Let them travel far,
Further than my heart -

Hi xxVixx I enjoyed very much your write.... it says so very much
thank-you for sharing, angel thumbs up
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