unknown feelings

We have been friends a long time now, and i love you more each day. I know you have a woman of your own, so i dont let the words get away. When i see what she does to you, it makes me want to cry. After all the pain you've been through i feel like i should try.
Let me love you. Let me show you what is right, let me put my arms around you, and give you love tonight. Let me show you what your missing, from the evening to days light. You are my hearts desire, ive waited for my entire life.
A man as fine as you, should not be treated so unkind. My thoughts are so confused"damn" If only you knew what was on my mind. She could never feel for you what i feel within my soul, your that special man to me, one i long to hold.
Is it not so obvious, the ups and downs we've shared. The memories both good & bad. Our hopes, dreams & fears??
The arguements & disagreements, sometimes you see my view. Friendship, love & trust, i also see that..do you??
When we share a greeting, a laugh or just a smile. Do you ever see or feel the emotions that i hide??
One lesson that ive learned in life, " love does not wait" so here it goes, i must convey & spill my guts with faith.
Risking our friendship, is such a scarey thought but living with the what if's. Really truly " hurts". Now my unknown feelings are finally set free. Vulnerable yet honest, hope he takes a chance on me......
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Posted: Mar 2012
About this poem:
I wrote this poem as a song originally, a long time ago. Its about taking chances even when we are unsure of the outcome. Its just about letting our thoughts and feelings free.

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studecar
you write very well,words well chosen, the feelings are so greatly expressed. my feelings go out to you,i hope you regain the one you love. studecar
Yankee4youonline today!
You really are saying what fear is holding back...that great fear of rejection we all know and hate...so hard to say when our feelings are so mixed up...what do we want versus what does another want from love? Is it really anything to do with comprimise or is it just truth that matters? Setting unkown feelings free is like sailing off into the sunset or our dreams....
zealousbeaver
This I would love to do but I am a coward you see,so for me it cannot be, so frienship so special it will have to be.I will suffer in silence and wish. You wrote that poem so so well with lots of feeling thank you. wine sad flower
cherryreggae
Thanks yankee....you totally got it!!!! You also made me aware, of how we internalize and change. The greatest fear sometimes is our selves, its sad that we hold back so much. Thankyou for your comment:)
cherryreggae
I hear you zealous!!!! I know that feeling to well. Its heart breaking but true!! Unfair but totally understand. I have suffered in silence as well, Thankyou for sharing that with me, deeply appreciatedlips comfort bouquet
Naimlis
From one poet to another I'm speechless
Poetnumber1
A very lovely poem,i figured you're a new face in poets corner,i extend a welcome to you to poets corner...M.Mwine
cherryreggae
Hello poet...ty very much i really appreciate the warm welcomeheart wings
swade777
Though written a long time ago.... this sort of situation is one that plaques so very many (man and woman alike) each and every day! You've expressed perfectly in writing what so many can only understand and often choose to keep carefully guarded within their own hearts for fear of the rejection that might result from exposing themselves. You have a terrific talent for conveying complex issues in very easy to understand poetry! AWESOME!!! thumbs up thumbs up thumbs up
cherryreggae
Thanks so much naim...truly appreciate your comment!!!!hug handshake
cherryreggae
Thank you sawed that means so much to me....hearing that comment is truly appreciated tybouquet teddybear lips hug
windyweatherly
Cherryreggae, I can definitely feel you. This is just eloquent and very true to what youfeel.

Thanks for sharing..teddybear
cherryreggae
Many thanks windy!!!hug handshake bouquet
Naimlis
Wow That was deep it's like "You make me wanna leave the one I'm with start a new relationship"...Nice
cherryreggae
Lol nam that sounds so familiar usher got it right ha ha thankyouhug
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