Thanks so much dh I appreciate all your comments and feedback....your lovely:0)
rapturecapturekerry, Kerry IrelandMay 24, 2013
Hi Cherrie
Where ever you went on holiday lol... I want to be/go you have no idea how much your words! mean to me right now...powerful! Nice one Cherry, in my opinion well deserved at that... Thank you... Wonderful inspiring poem
Your fan as always from Ireland Martina xxx
shadow1950taunton, Somerset, England UKMay 24, 2013
a poem to be read by multitudes simple and full of passion fine pen
niah9Auckland, New ZealandMay 24, 2013
Buried in a cemetery of doom.....that is a statement cherryreggae......from Tremble my heart...you had us captured... Kathy
cameal6someplace, Washington USAMay 24, 2013
reminds me of the song by prince called when the doves cry.
Lol OMG!!!! Martina, im gleaming with happiness....thanks so much for your gracious comment, it really touches me and made my day. I feel so welcomed by you,, maybe I should go away,, again. Ha ha joke joke .... but genuinely appreciate your kindness and. 4 enjoying the poem....means alot to me .... Blessings always my friend thanks martina
morgen90210singapore, Central Singapore SingaporeMay 25, 2013
dear princess bunny, this is so well painted, gothic and yet with shades of grey and blues
captivating and spellbound, like a mini comic novel you took us out of town into a world of yours
simply deep write it speaks a loud a magical play ground and kept me enthralled
thank you
Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoMay 25, 2013
Hi Cherrybunny,I am charmed by this piece.I like the mystic feel to it,mixed with that deeply entrancing beauty.
Tremble my heart, follow my lead this way. Listen to the violins, before they begin to play.
As the doves cry, in sorrow & the hogs, grunt at the moon. They will be waiting for you In a ditch meant for your tomb
Excellent my dear,it seems like everybody is howling and grunting at the moon these days.
morgen90210singapore, Central Singapore SingaporeMay 25, 2013
Hi kathy ,,, just like reading. Your escape, its amazing where our stregnth lies in adversity. The power of healing & determination....& most of all devine intervention......thanks for your uplifting comment...appreciate you very much
I was thinking last night as I was watching Three's Company that I can't play a violin because I live in an apartment and the noise would just be too much. I have often felt that feeling of doom and gloom at work. The feeling you are in a huge cement and metal tombstone.
Lol mcrad...I tried to take violin lessons Thanks for your comment as a kid, I wasnt that good lol....ohhh. thats a scary thought. I think I will be cremated
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Where ever you went on holiday lol... I want to be/go
you have no idea how much your words!
mean to me right now...powerful!
Nice one Cherry, in my opinion well deserved at that...
Thank you... Wonderful inspiring poem
Your fan as always from Ireland
Martina xxx
Kathy
Blessings always my friend thanks martina
this is so well painted,
gothic and yet with shades
of grey and blues
captivating and spellbound,
like a mini comic novel
you took us out of town
into a world of yours
simply deep write
it speaks a loud
a magical play ground
and kept me enthralled
thank you
Tremble my heart,
follow my lead this way.
Listen to the violins,
before they begin to play.
As the doves cry, in sorrow
& the hogs, grunt at the moon.
They will be waiting for you
In a ditch meant for your tomb
Excellent my dear,it seems like everybody is howling and grunting at the moon these days.
Hmmmm howling & grunting at the moon.. yes I can agree