Lost,.....yet so complete.
Can your eyes see,
What's so deep.
Can your heart feel,
The murmur,
That reaps.
The gravitation towards,
Silence in your speech.
Pulls me in a direction,
so out of reach,
which awakens This feeling,
lost yet so complete...
The caress in your eyes,
Without being touched.
The kiss in your voice,
disguised, in such lust.
The magnetism in your aura,
Leaves me visibly, flushed.
Without uttering a word,
Your thoughts call my name,
Whispered in the dusk.
Catching each grain...
Your alluring smile,
Is a thief in destined defeat.
You have captured apart of me,
Lost,......yet so complete.
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Feb 2013
Comments (21)
Without uttering a word
Your thoughts call my name,
Whispered in the dusk,
Catching each grain...
Another wonderful write very deep and a Powerful read...
Thank you for sharing, wishing you have a very warm Valentines Day your Fan From Ireland...Martina.
your best poem I've ever read
and it speaks for itself. . .
a touch of brilliance
Many thanks!!! Appreciate your feedback, always...means so much to me:)
Have a lovely Valentine's day!!! .....
happy Valentine's day!!!
Much gratitude always, to you, my friend
happy Valentine's day!!!
Nice job hon!
Thanks for your kindness & thoughtful words...& in your recent poem!!it really helped uplift, when I couldn't write a single word. We all go through writers block & it was comforting & encouraging to read heartfelt appreciation.....
happy Valentine's day
I wonder i could you write so deep Cherry...
I wonder how could you write so deep Cherry...
.. .justenuff, for your lovely & generous comment. Truly appreciate it!!
. happy Valentine's day!!
Happy Valentine's day!!!
Your thoughts call my name,
Whispered in the dusk.
Catching each grain...
Cherrie, my friend these lines are just screaming with passion etched in the deepest of one's passion. Just lovely my dear and thanks for sharing.
Windy
Thanks for sharing, swt cherry..