starsign challenge A Scorpios Kiss

by cherryreggaebayside, New York, USA

Mar 2013 1,164 Views 26 comments

starsign challenge. (A Scorpio's Kiss)

A Scorpios kiss...
A scorpios kiss,
Is one not to miss
A suculant dish,
Of secret myths.
A sensual being,
That's hypnotic, yet
Appealing.
Revealed in the eyes
A stare that paralyze
The object of a heart's
Desire.
That dwells in, a loving
Disguise.
Is magnified & personified
By intuition, they thrive.
There emotional ties,
Abhors sufferation, of any kind.
In justice they seek,
To help provide for the meek.
If the cause is worthy,
there loyalty, is unswearving.
Brutal honesty, often misunderstood
For trying to do good.
Although humorous,
creative & kind
Oversensitive nature,
is perceived
A most negative vibe.
But with each kiss
There is a dangerous twist!!!!
When hurt they bring,
A most painful sting!!!!
A self defense mechanism
Sealed with a kiss!!!!
From a scorpios lips:)

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Posted: Mar 2013

About this poem:

I am a scorpion:) lol
Thanks Spartacus & lady m, for the challenge.
A fun write, that hasn't been done in awhile!!!:) Ty...

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Comments (26)

madtat29Farmington, New Mexico USAMar 3, 2013

Whup whup ...excellent cherry! Had me on the edge of my seat..and described to a tee a true scorpio...good write and read...

cherryreggaeOPbayside, New York USAMar 3, 2013

Hi tat...thanks so much

glad you liked, appreciate your comment!!!

morgen90210singapore, Central Singapore SingaporeMar 3, 2013

hi cherry you sound like another
Black Emperor like madtat keeping. . .
Scorpion Gals are the most deadly attractive ones not to be messed around!
thumbs up bunny

LadyMorgana60Norwich, Norfolk, England UKMar 3, 2013

I'm finding out so much about astrology through this challenge plus added bonus is a great insight behind all poets who have joined in from their star signs ..

And this is a wonderful entry Cherry! well met..with many thanks for joining in

FellsmanLake District, Cumbria, England UKMar 3, 2013

It's a brave man who would mess with a Scorpio woman Cherry - on the other hand, their passion knows no bounds, which can almost scary. A very good entry for the star sign challenge.

Regards

Bill

Spartacus2012Biloxi, Mississippi USAMar 3, 2013

Hey CR a spellbinding read to be sure..Thanks for accepting the challenge and nicely done...Ken

cherryreggaeOPbayside, New York USAMar 3, 2013

I was thinking, of the same thing, lady m....
Enjoying all these great poems, learning more about astrology
& the poets behind our star signs, that we enjoy so much

Appreciate your feedback & glad to be apart of, this challenge!!
Many thanks again, to you both

cherryreggaeOPbayside, New York USAMar 3, 2013

Lol very true bill...but common why not take a chance

Nothing to lose except, maybe your sanity!!!!

joke joke....where not so bad!!! Lol

Thanks 4 your comment

cherryreggaeOPbayside, New York USAMar 3, 2013

Thanks for the challenge ken, enjoying everyone's star sign, lots of fun to read & enjoyed writing. Really helps with writing to as I'm blocked

Lol this helps alot

Thanks 4 feedback...Cherie.

fjamesj9701DunkinDonuts, Florida USAMar 3, 2013

I want one

rapturecapturekerry, Kerry IrelandMar 3, 2013

Hi Cherrie

A Scorpio.

Loved reading your thoughts on your star sign..beautiful mind you really have ..thanks for sharing as always.

Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoMar 3, 2013

I've got your back on this one my Cherrybumkin.

Can i have one to.

Lovely write.

Odette67Penrith, Cumbria, England UKMar 4, 2013

But with each kiss
There is a dangerous twist!!!!
When hurt they bring,
A most painful sting!!!!

No one rises out of destruction and chaos like the Scorpio..like the Phoenix she rises from among the ashes to soar triumphantly through the air.
Great write Cherry.

cherryreggaeOPbayside, New York USAMar 4, 2013

Thanks Jesse

:) appreciate your comment

cherryreggaeOPbayside, New York USAMar 4, 2013

Thanks for your kindness rapture....always

cherryreggaeOPbayside, New York USAMar 4, 2013

Here you go m....

many thanks my friend

cherryreggaeOPbayside, New York USAMar 4, 2013

Definetly truth in those words Odette!!!

truly appreciate your comment Thankyou!!!

trurorobAlicante, Valencia SpainMar 4, 2013

Nicely sensual, well written
Rob

vyoletaArkaroola, South Australia AustraliaMar 5, 2013

Excellent idea for a poem. I enjoyed it. Thanks.

smmerwindSan Francisco, California USAMar 5, 2013

But with each kiss
There is a dangerous twist!!!!
When hurt they bring,
A most painful sting!!!!

A self defense mechanism
Sealed with a kiss!!!!

From a scorpios lips:)

My dear sister, what a way to pursue a defense. I am so awed with the strength and firm stance of Scorpio. Wwhich according to the signs a very compatible union with Leo. Which I am, of course, My dad was a leo, and he was and still is my hero. He was so strong and resilient yet a pillar of great strength and wisdom and lack of fear. Never backed down on any commetment he got into. I lvoed so much my sister and no wonder we are truly sister.

I will mail you my beautiful sister and consider it done. I will see you this summer.

_Phyllis

smmerwindSan Francisco, California USAMar 5, 2013

By the way my dearest loved sister. Plese you can also come to sunny california, yes?

love you

cherryreggaeOPbayside, New York USAMar 5, 2013

Thanks so much rob, appreciate your kind words.....

cherryreggaeOPbayside, New York USAMar 5, 2013

Thanks so much vyoleta so glad you enjoyed it thanks

cherryreggaeOPbayside, New York USAMar 5, 2013

Really appreciate your comment!! Many thanks for taking time out to always write such lovely comments and give great feedback.
I'm looking forward to that Phyllis...Thankyou sis:)

cherryreggaeOPbayside, New York USAMar 9, 2013

Hi phyllis I missed that msg, sorry yes definetly will:) Thankyou