The things I will take ( challenge)

It may sound foolish,
or even a lie,
On a isolated island,
I wish to reside.

The first thing I must take,
is the love I have inside.
A gift given, to me.
My joy, my pride, my child.

To rid ones self of material possessions
& live in splendid harmony.
Natural surroundings of simplicity,
Is where my heart, yearns to be.

Challenges will always, arise
In adverse circumstances,
We persist to survive.
Just as I did, in the concrete jungle,
Of my former life.

The second thing I would take,
is not a physical Thing, to see.
It is of a spiritual nature,
a prayer & a plea.

The prayer would be simply,
for the most high to,Guide & strengthen me.
To help through the perils,
of this unknown territory.

I would ask for knowledge & skills to adapt
For all basic needs.
Especially of, well being
To ward off, "insanity"

While I am away, my heart will dismay,
for our humanity.
I will plea, for peace in a restless society,
that is governed, By manipulation & greed.

Where wars & rumors of wars
will plague the air I breathe.
I will silently pray, in hopes not dismay,
for Gods eternal Mercy.

The last thing I will take, is my given soul.
I could not leave that behind, for it is
All I own.
When the body does, decline & if by chance death comes to me.
The, remains of my carcass is the last memory.
That's when my spirit, mind & body, can finally be free

Because God has prepared,
a place for you & me.
A room with many
Mansions, I cant wait to see,
if only we believe.

Till then, this isolated island, ....is just temporary.
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Sep 2013
About this poem:
Thanks for the challenge shadow, you have a great mind for them:0)

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Comments (18)

darkhorse555
beautiful piece of writing i enjoyed angel thumbs up
cherryreggae
Hi liam thanks for your kind comment,,, much appreciated my friend!!!hug handshake purple heart heart beating
shadow1950
hi Cherry what interesting and sensible things you take Ty for joining in teddybear bouquet hug kiss wine
diana_1
Oh just lovely, just right the things that you take. Absolutely splendiferous I say...cheering applause yay
bard76
Cherie! this is wonderful, your writing has so progressed into intelligence, soul and wonder. I wish I had your beliefs, your passion. amazing write. your a true poet....david.....xxxx
Poetnumber1
Good write Cherry. Interesting choices that you've penned here. Loved it! teddybear
madtat29
Nice wine
hedistuff
It seems that nirvana has pulled you to that island. I can't imagine you having any thoughts to ever leaving. Very pretty poetry...so content.
cherryreggae
Hi shadow, your so welcome:) Thankyou more for the challenge, really enjoyed writing & being apart of it,, peace & <3 cherie
cherryreggae
Hi diana,,, thanks so much for your lovely & kind comment, much appreciatedhug angel yay cherie,,,
cherryreggae
David, your to kind, thanks so much for your heartfelt comment. Miss you my dear friend,,, many thanks:)hug teddybear heart1 gift heart1
rapturecapture
Hi Cherry

Really enjoyed your thoughts in this wonderful challenge.
Stunning...A mansion of a poem in its own right.
Loved it.
Thank you for sharing.

Martina xxxhug applause angel wave
cherryreggae
HI m thanks so much, for your comment....peace & <3 cheriehug teddybear bouquet hug
cherryreggae
Many thanks tatt,,,,much appreciateddancing grin teddybear Cheriex
cherryreggae
Lol hedistuff,,,,your right I think I'd just stay, definitely nirvana:0) love your comment thanks so right,,handshake teddybear bouquet thanksfor your comment thumbs up heart1 heart wings
cherryreggae
Many thanks Martina for your kind review,,,always appreciated onelove cherieheart1 heart beating purple heart heart wings
Serenity4two
to live in " natural surroundings of simplicity " - that would be a dream come true thumbs up
Beautiful poetry indeed Cherry ! warm regards -F hug
shadow1950
scoring starts tomorrowteddybear
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