THE WALLS HAVE EARS
Author: Unknown
September 10, 1982
These walls have cracked and settled, for many many years
Often I have heard it said, that every wall has ears
I know these walls have witnessed, each joy and tragedy
They know the lies and love, within this family
These walls contain a history in nail holes and glue
In layers of paint and paper, so long ago were new
These walls have worn the marks of artistic tiny hands
Fingerprints and pencil lead, lipstick, dirt, and crayons
These walls have served as shelter for keeping out the rain
They've guarded every smile and frown, well within its frame
These walls have made a home for all who stepped inside
A certain warmth and comfort, laced with so much pride
The cracks have grown wider...one last look around
We say good-bye with sadness as mournful echoes sound
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Posted: Apr 2012
About this poem:
As you can see, this poem was written many years ago. I am revisiting the echoes of the past today and sharing a couple of them with you. Those old poems show me my growth and are chapters of my life. We can all relate to the dust that has collected and sometimes I learn new things from mine.
Comments (20)
Like you, I have moved many times over the years & very recently had moved from a place I had been for 11yrs! (longest ever!)
I gave my blessings to my old home as I left for the new couple who where moving in, hoping they to will have many happy years there as I did..
Just inside the door, a few years before..I had painted on the wall, words of protection & care for all who stepped inside..when decorating, then I painted over..so its covered..but there :-)
As you say "Walls have ears" & a heart.
Thank you for sharing..very much enjoyed.
P.S..Mind you..had to use the "Smudge Stick" when I moved into my new home!
Thus in my ancient retrogressive way I keep trying to fly the flag for rhyme and rhythm, and dread the time (which probably isn't too far off) when no one will attach any literary value to these qualities at all.
Regards
Bill
Whether These walls have made a home for all who stepped inside or all who stepped inside made these walls a home, your poem beautiful, full of love, meaning and well-earned nostalgia.
And Bill, I guess the reason I still write in rhyme, is because it really is a challenge to do it well. I have written a few songs and rhythm and rhyme are critical there. I'm fairly sure I have over 1,ooo poems here I'm sifting through. Thank you all for your support. I love a good challenge too, but I better finish this project first!~
Fare Thee Well Good Bards!~
A toast of sparkling cider or your beverage of choice!~
Hello from me. This is such a good poem. Places stay in your subconsciousness well after you leave them. They have a smell and a perspective that is haunted by those experiences that seem to have been recorded in their own place in time.
As for the aabb rhyme scheme, I've often used it and when it is done well, like it has been done here, it creates its own music.
Your comments always make me feel warm and welcome. It means a lot to have a fellowship and I know I keep saying that, but it's true and has much merit for me.
Kathy, you said:
I have moved so many times since 1997, and sometimes I longed to put down roots, but maybe my roots are in the soil....because I seem to return to an area, if not a house...but I think it is the sharing too...memories....thanks for sharing celtic...Kathy
I can relate. I finally live in an area that I love and I have for the first time, invested myself in the community in which I live. This is the first place I ever WANTED to put down roots. I leave and I can't wait to come back. That says a lot. Blessings to you both and thanks for stopping to have a read. Hugs!~