Speak not above a whisper Though crying out inside Sacrificing simple needs It’s safer just to hide
Betrayed by all emotion These complex traits ingrained Some inherent, some are learned And some are unexplained
All those years believing, spent Firm, without exception That some are born to suffer Granted no protection
The sickness is our secrets Those shadows of disgrace Damning truths we still believe The hope our fears erase
Speak well above a whisper Shed safely all concerns Life has been a frenzied maze Of complicated turns
Stand and earn your freedom For now, look not behind You have enough to deal with You have yourself to find
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Posted: Oct 2012
About this poem:
I was two years sober when I wrote this poem. I was in so much pain and confusion was a daily event as I stuggled to sort out the reasons I drank. It took many more years to find my voice, find my anger and take back my life. This poem is one of the first awakenings that I even could...take back my power, or that my life was my own. A poem to you. Life saving therapy for me.
this is a awesome write celtic ...........really enjoyed this ....regards n61
Odette67Penrith, Cumbria, England UKOct 7, 2012
Thank you for sharing this thought provoking poem Celtic.
CelticPoet12OPPrescott, Arizona USAOct 7, 2012
Thank you so much POET, N61 and ODETTE!~ I wish I knew a way to truly express the way I feel when someone comments on one of my poems. I believed for a very long time that I never had anything of value to say. It's the was I grew up. I am honestly speechless sometimes. I am certainly humbled and the feeling is over the top. THANK YOU. THANK YOU. THANK YOU!~ Once upon a time, I would NEVER dream of letting anyone know these secrets. It's wonderful to "feel safe" here on Poet's Corner. Blessings!~
Celtic
CelticPoet12OPPrescott, Arizona USAOct 7, 2012
I meant to say it's the WAY I grew up. Whoops!~
snowytopargyle, Manitoba CanadaOct 7, 2012
You have a special gift Celtic.I enjoyed your poem very much ! Well written!
CelticPoet12OPPrescott, Arizona USAOct 7, 2012
Thanks Snowytop, what a sweet thing to say. Much appreciated. Have a wonderful evening. Celtic!~
This is lovely Celtic, so soft and yet strong inside.
FellsmanLake District, Cumbria, England UKOct 9, 2012
Hi Celtic
This cathartic write works so very well with faultless rhythm - this is one of those poems that gives a very personal insight into the poet as a person, which is a brave thing to do...
Best wishes
Bill
CelticPoet12OPPrescott, Arizona USAOct 9, 2012
Thanks LadyBee! Much appreciated. Each of the poems from that era were very much about healing. A breath, a step, a word, a hug and some days...a scream at a time. I never knew who I was. I never knew I was in the driver's seat. I certainly didn't know how to make wise choices. Some days I had no will to live. This is one of the poems that signifies my "sock in the face" to the demons I fought. I used to be embarrassed by it, all those years ago. WHY? Because everyone else seemed to "get it" but me. Poet's Corner feels like a safe place to let myself be known a little bit more. I share, I learn, I grow and I am humbled when someone can relate and in some way these poems help. Blessings to you and all the teachers I meet along the way on this journey through life. Hugs, Celtic!~
CelticPoet12OPPrescott, Arizona USAOct 9, 2012
Hi Bill, thank you for what you said. I guess I pretty well said it all with my comments to LadyBee. I am so honored by your comments and to read "faultless" in regards to my rhyme. Brave? Perhaps. I find people can relate to those who can open up and be vulnerable. Anymore, I toughen up when I need to and do a much better job of taking care of myself. I think everyone here has had their hearts and egos bruised a time or two. I can tell by the writing. Hats off to those who can share now who couldn't in the past. Hugs to you and have a great evening. Celtic. Back at cha Bill.
studecarsayre, Oklahoma USAOct 9, 2012
I am glad you conquered your probems because it gave us your fine poetry. studecar
charliejaparteeAuckland, New ZealandOct 9, 2012
ka pai ehoa kia kaha kia maia kia
CelticPoet12OPPrescott, Arizona USAOct 9, 2012
Thank you kindly Studecar. You made my day!~ Much appreciated.
Charlie, sorry, could you please translate? I'm lost. Celtic
windyweatherlySan Francisco, California USAOct 10, 2012
My dearest friend. This is a masterpiece..I haven't read you like this. This s a documented journey on what we need to wade to get to the most important part and that is FINDING OURSELVES. A JOURNEY THAT WILL NEVER END. I AM LOST FOREVER AND ALWAYS THE TIME SPENT IN FINDING MYSELF IS SUCH A CRUCIAL PART OF MY EXISTENCE. FABULOUS ENDING. LLOVE IT MY DEAR FRIEND...
Speak well above a whisper Shed safely all concerns Life has been a frenzied maze Of complicated turns
Stand and earn your freedom For now, look not behind You have enough to deal with You have yourself to find
Thanks for sharing...
windy
CelticPoet12OPPrescott, Arizona USAOct 10, 2012
Thanks WINDY for your heartfelt comments. So appreciated. You mentioned that you haven't read me like this. SO true. I haven't shared in this vein before and as mentioned, it takes feeling safe and I do now, at this stage of my life. The process never ends as you stated. So true. Have a good one and thank you again for all your kind and touching comments. Hugs, abundance and blessings to you!~ Celtic
Comments (19)
Celtic
Well written!
This cathartic write works so very well with faultless rhythm - this is one of those poems that gives a very personal insight into the poet as a person, which is a brave thing to do...
Best wishes
Bill
Brave? Perhaps. I find people can relate to those who can open up and be vulnerable. Anymore, I toughen up when I need to and do a much better job of taking care of myself. I think everyone here has had their hearts and egos bruised a time or two. I can tell by the writing. Hats off to those who can share now who couldn't in the past. Hugs to you and have a great evening. Celtic.
Back at cha Bill.
Charlie, sorry, could you please translate? I'm lost. Celtic
Speak well above a whisper
Shed safely all concerns
Life has been a frenzied maze
Of complicated turns
Stand and earn your freedom
For now, look not behind
You have enough to deal with
You have yourself to find
Thanks for sharing...
windy
This is such a memorable poem.
Every word is perfectly placed delivering such insight.
I love it.