Love's Bask (MacDuff's Challenge)

"How much do I love thee?"
A poet one time asked;
His answer was an awesome thing
As in a lover's glow he basked.

Now I don't speak at all like that
Fancy words don't come my way;
I find simple words the best
For things I have to say.

"How much do I love you?"
Well, Old Shakespeare he may say;
"I love you as the morning dew
Doth love the brand new day".

"And how strong are my feelings?"
He's probably say with glee;
"My love is strong enough to bind
My soul with that of thee".

And I wonder what Old Bill would say
About how long my love would last;
'Til both earth and time stand still
They sure spoke fine in days gone past.

I wish I had those fancy words
To tell about my love;
I even hit my knees and asked
For help from up above.

My hands are cool and chilly
As I try to find a word;
I even asked the old folks
For any phrase they may have heard.

They just laugh at me
And say, "Just go give him a kiss
You're going to have a heart attack
If you keep on like this".

But I've got to get this message right
You simply have to know
How my heart feels so deep inside
And how I need you so.

I'll love you for forever
My love is so strong and true;
My love's so big my heart may burst,
These things I'd say to you.

But I'm not a fancy poet
So I'll just say I love you;
I'll leave the fancy words to someone else
Just say you'll love me too.
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Apr 2012
About this poem:
I just penned this in response to MacDuff's challenge. :-)

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Comments (20)

lucy1777
GREAT WRITE MY FRIEND!teddybear
Special_Lady67
Beautifulbouquet
ReaderOfSouls
Thank you, Lucy!! :)hug
paloma66
The best words plain and simple come directly from the heart,fancy words are easy to be spoken, but when you say," I Love You" in a simple way with a heart full of love they are the best,Mary you are unique in your own way,I just loved the whole poem.purple heart thumbs up heart wings hug
ReaderOfSouls
Thank you, Special_Lady! cowboy
Macduff5
Hi Mary,

I know that you are a "fancy poet". I love your take on this one. A great response...very intuitive and with a good deal of plain Texan truth. thumbs up bouquet bouquet
swade777
Mary, if it weren't for your 'Bear' love affair, you'd be chased all other globe by us single men!!! Excellent contribution fellow American Poet!! hug thumbs up
ReaderOfSouls
Hi Paloma!! hug cowboy

I definitely seem to have carved out a unique niche here.laugh :)I'm so glad you enjoyed this piece. :)hug hug hug heart wings purple heart heart beating heart1
ReaderOfSouls
Hi MacDuff!! cowboy hug

I can write "fancy" when I want to. I just wrote this up as a quick response to your challenge in my own way. :) I'm really glad you like it! hug heart wings
thesunandthesea
OMG))))))))))))))
love
WOW WOW WOOOOWWWW))))

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But I'm not a fancy poet
So I'll just say I love you!!!!


ROS!!! I LOVED THIS!!! It's easy, simple and SUPER SWEET!!!!
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LOVED IT LOADS!!!!smitten
Maxeen_1
Hya R.O.S. what a Superb poem really says so much simply but hits the mark.. ..purple heart hug bouquet
But I've got to get this message right
You simply have to know
How my heart feels so deep inside
And how I need you so.

I'll love you for forever
My love is so strong and true;
My love's so big my heart may burst,
These things I'd say to you.

Just say you'll love me too.
ReaderOfSouls
Hi Bill cowboy

As you know, I can write fancy when the mood doth strikes and let my pieces paint the words for the reader. :) I'm so glad you enjoyed this one. hug hug wine
ReaderOfSouls
Hi Sunny!! cowboy hug hug

Sometimes the best way to say things are the simple ways of all. :) So glad you enjoyed this one. hug hug hug heart wings heart beating purple heart teddybear
ReaderOfSouls
Hi Maxeene cowboy hug

I'm so glad you enjoyed this piece. Sometimes the simple ways are best. :) hug hug heart wings teddybear heart beating purple heart
studecar
Dear Readerofsouls, you write with such eloquence,I would much read you than what Snakespit wrote, how much do I love you, I would count the ways except I would have to take my shoes off, I dont have enough fingers. studecar
ReaderOfSouls
Thank you, studecar.Glad you liked it. cowboy
LadyMorgana60
Very much enjoyed your poem Readerofsouls
Fab work..no fancy words ever needed..when it flows from the heart wine cheering
ReaderOfSouls
Howdy LadyMorgana!! cowboy

Sometimes the simple words are all that's ever needed. :) So glad you enjoyed this piece. :) heart wings cowboy
ReaderOfSouls
A sweet word on this Day of Hearts. cowboy. heart wings
Happychatty1online today!
Hi ReaderOfSouls
Such a pleasure to read this poem that I missed first time round, thanks for sharing it
Happy Valentine’s Day wave heart wings teddybear
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