Colors

by fjamesj9701DunkinDonuts, Florida, USA

May 2012 961 Views 24 comments

Colors

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I would like to paint my dreams with all the colors I find in you
Because lately all of my own they have been darkened and so gloom
If I could be the man you deserve I would gift wrap the world for you
Then buy a golden spaceship and carve your face upon the moon
So if I should ever lose my way your light will guide me home
Where I could find some peace in knowing I am not alone
But I am just a simple man who lives his life for you
And nothing I have seen compares to everything you do
My landscape would be empty if I couldn't share the view
And I would never want to wake up so I could paint more dreams of you
~ JJF~

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Posted: May 2012

About this poem:

Inspired by music

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Comments (24)

lucy1777Broken Arrow Oklahoma, Oklahoma USAMay 5, 2012

This is a sweet pom flames

CloudySkyMoreno Valley, California USAMay 5, 2012

Inspiration well put into words. This is a picture of beauty painted in words. Great job Fjames

AhyraAdelaide, South Australia AustraliaMay 5, 2012

Lovely poem James

Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoMay 5, 2012

Its nice to see you my friend,thanks for gracing the board with your lovely work that was an awesome piece

LadyMorgana60Norwich, Norfolk, England UKMay 5, 2012

Lovely Poem James, thank you for sharing :-)

Odette67Penrith, Cumbria, England UKMay 5, 2012

Nice to see you james with anoter of your beautful writes.

elo69santa cruz, California USAMay 5, 2012

Nice to see you James,enjoy your heart felt style...elo..

Special_Lady67oil city, Pennsylvania USAMay 5, 2012

Inspired by music...... Thankfully we have inspiration in the Beauty that surrounds us.. Thank you for writing a beautiful, and lovely poem...It was definitely felt with the heart.

fjamesj9701OPDunkinDonuts, Florida USAMay 6, 2012

Thank you everyone for reading and leaving you marks.I have read many of yours and its humbling to be complimented by great writers .and its nice to see you all

fjamesj9701OPDunkinDonuts, Florida USAMar 11, 2013

Thank you Celtic Very much appreciayed

beautifulyouNew York, USAMar 11, 2013

Your colours are magnificent Jesse, even during times when they may seem darkened. That's just my opinion

smmerwindSan Francisco, California USAMar 11, 2013

DREAMS James, to me are very beautiful extension of our mind working even while we are consciously resting. What a beautiful dream indeed that comes to your awareness.

I dream a lot, my love, always is the first to hear my dreams and sometimes, I dream things that will eventually happen. It is some kind of scary sometimes but I find that when I just accept the dreams I have a peace of mind. Sometimes the dreams are so beautiful and wish I didn't yet wake up, you know?

Thanks for the share James.

Smmerwind

fjamesj9701OPDunkinDonuts, Florida USAMar 12, 2013

Thank you Beautiful You for the nice comment , Im glad to share

......Jesse

fjamesj9701OPDunkinDonuts, Florida USAMar 12, 2013

Thank you Phyllis for your thoughts , I am glad to have captured them ....Jesse

soulgoddessTokyo, Kanto JapanFeb 26, 2014

YOU are a wonderful poet

candykidAshburn, Virginia USAApr 22, 2014

Outstanding piece, every line....

fjamesj9701OPDunkinDonuts, Florida USAApr 27, 2014

Thank kindly my Dear SG, it has always been my pleasure to hear from you…Jesse

fjamesj9701OPDunkinDonuts, Florida USAApr 27, 2014

Thank you Mr CK, I am honored by your comment. Thank you again…Jesse

Odette67Penrith, Cumbria, England UKMay 1, 2014

I would like to paint my dreams with all the colors i find in you

Just read this poem again Jesse, for some reason it brought tears to my eyes, it is just so beautiful. You are a star.

fjamesj9701OPDunkinDonuts, Florida USAMay 1, 2014

Thank you my Dearest C your forever kind to me and Im glad you would read twice that is priceless to me. Thank you again…Jesse

Girlygirl196349Fullerton, California USAMay 8, 2014

Wow!! Why a beautiful poem I so enjoyed reading this