Once more the wordsare in my head So it is no use me going to bed. For the words will not let me sleep. Not even by counting sheep. So i sit here with pen and paper. Knowing words will come sooner or later. But will they covey what my feelings are?. And one day be read by people from near and far. I hope my words will make people feel. There is love out there and it is real. So listen to what your heart has to say. And if it says yes then go all the way. No half meaures no holding back. Get out your case and bags to pack. Take a bus boat or plane. Follow that loving feeling or go insane......J
OndosSydney, New South Wales AustraliaJul 15, 2012
Go insane....to me means become sane. Along my line of thinking.. Go for it....we waste our lives being conservative, reserved and afraid. Love it. Keep rolling..
"No holding back...for the words will not let me sleep. Not even by counting sheep..." It could just be the very reason I've been losing sleep lately! I know just what my heart is saying and have listened to it...still I have not packed my bag...your poem might just kick me in the butt! Thanks for sharing, glad to meet you
Serenity4twoDonegal, IrelandJul 16, 2012
A beautiful poignant poem --conveying so perfectly a situation which happens to so many of us --where potentially the most amazing romance and true love could have blossomed , if one or both did not "hold back "and waste something so rare and precious .I hope you are right, that there is indeed "real love" out there somewhere . Again , well done on words so beautifully written
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Go for it....we waste our lives being conservative, reserved and afraid.
Love it. Keep rolling..
Again , well done on words so beautifully written