Lucy's challenge See Me Now

For in this day i see the colors
of the leaves fallen to meet the
ground as if to display their
color on nature's canvas of life.

As the sun comes up it is as if
the music is playing a song for you.
Then nature joins in for you to hear
the animals and music in the breeze.

You listen to all that is around you
for it puts you at ease nature
siloueting you with song and art.
It is as if beauty is everywhere.

Mother nature introduces herself
in the most unique way sometimes.
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Posted: Jul 2012
About this poem:
I tried hope it sounds good and is technical correct.

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lucy1777
It is a very nice sonnet but I am not the expert on the technicalitys I wrote mine with a seven syllable count instead of ten which is the rule I do believe. Thank you for so much for participating and I enjoyed reading this!teddybear
adjhe
lucy thanks so much for your comment. Have a great day.teddybear bouquet applause applause
mcradloff
I see leaves falling too, but they are either falling from japanese beetles or from lack of rain. I still appreciate the nature when it is night, and the temperature is back below 90 again.lightbulb uncertain daisy good luck
adjhe
mcradloff thanks for the comment. Have a good day.banana applause
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