I could never forget that hair..long and flowing, like black silk against a moonit night She would notice me watching her as she boarded the train each morning With a tinge of embarrassment I would quickly turn my head Yet there was that smile as she would toss that hair over her shoulder and I would gaze even more deeply as I watched it lay like soft velvet on the contours of her graceful neck Was the wind some mysterious mistress visiting my senses when it engulfed that lusty silk on this gusty March morning? My daydreams became my nightdreams and a full moon would illumine our entwined bodies with her blanket of hair dragging across my chest teasing me like angelic feathers One night I was awakened by a soft knock on my door I made my way downstairs by flickering candlelight I opened the door slowly and there was that shimmering hair..and that smile**
When i worked in London UK i would catch the same tube most days, there was a lady similar to yours, never came to my door, candle wasn't burning bright enough. lovely poem mate.
Macduff5Newcastle, New South Wales AustraliaDec 10, 2012
Hi Cafe,
What a realistic, romantic piece this is and you are so right about the hair. So often it just carries you away like "silk against a moonlit night". A lovely lyrical poem.
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lovely poem mate.
What a realistic, romantic piece this is and you are so right about the hair. So often it just carries you away like "silk against a moonlit night". A lovely lyrical poem.