The Dash

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August 19, 1933 - May 23, 2010
is what the tombstone read
If I could talk to them today I wondered the words that would be said
What a life, an adventure this person must have lived
All that they have seen, all that they did

But this date spoke to me in ways only a soul could ever hear
So I started to listen with my heart and not with my ears
The dash in the middle is where the journey of life begins
Not the born on date and surely not in the end

For what you do in between determines where our road will lead
Its not what you have done but rather what we do that brings us peace
So when I lie down in my bed am I grateful for the day
And when I am in my final rest will I have a smile on my face
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Posted: Dec 2012

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niah9
wow what a write from a young but thoughtful man ....the dash...such a concept.....loved it J J, though sad....Kathyteddybear
orientalkoru
pay it forward... your poem reminded me of that... I must say it takes a certain kind of person to be able to sit calmly and listen with his heart... I very much agree...the beginning and the end is made much more special by what the dash in between stands for. Loved it...enjoyed the read very much... and respect to you dear poet... teddybear wine thumbs up
fjamesj9701
Thank you for your kind comment Orientalkoru, very happy
Poetnumber1
Such wise words that i thought was quite practical and deep.Vehemently penedhandshake cheers
Ladybee42
Jesse - how awesome to think that the dash in the middle is the best part, the living part. Kudos to you sir for doing this job of finding loved ones that have passed away.

I really like your poem and the idea of the dash in the middle


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fjamesj9701
Thank you Mr PN1, you are very appreciated as alwayshandshake
fjamesj9701
Oh LB your just too kind, thank youteddybear
danibby09
Pure amazement.
Daveland
Very well done. its good to do it for the dead ones for good memories and respect. But while still living and no one cares to do the same, it's more than a dead life, good for the dead. Thank you.
fjamesj9701
Thank you Danibby09handshake
fjamesj9701
Thank you as well for your thoughts and comment Daveland handshake
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