Twenty nine year old Susan Vale parked her car on this cold December morn.. She wrapped her fur coat tightly around her neck and commenced the one block walk to the Lee Case office building where she worked as a Para Legal. For twelve years Susan had braved this side street of Baltimore often clutching her pocketbook tightly as she stepped quickly past side streets where the homeless would huddle and hold out a hand for spare change.. But until this raw cold morn she had never parted with even a handful of.change to one of these losers, a name her office associates had arrogantly given them.. And why should she? Had not life dealt her a bad hand? As a child her parents abbanded her to foster homes and her anger towards God, the world, and everything in it had kept her soul in chains seeking some kind of closure, something that could touch the little girl within..and say, 'Her life had meaning, and that there was some purpose to her existence.. Today she would take a chance on generosity, on a small act of kindness.. She reached into her purse and fished out a fistful of change and pushed the coins into the hand of this homeless man whose tortured lonely blue eyes could barely mumble a thank you.. Susan quickly walked away and being a half block away the homeless man choked with tears cried out, 'Thank you marbles.' Susan frose in her tracks. Marbles? 'That's what my daddy used to call me when I was five. She turned and stared deeply into the eyes of this broken soul and rushed and knealt holding his trembling frame to her. Through his choking tears he throbbed, ' I am your daddy darling.' And Susan wrapped this cold destroyed man with her fur coat and half carrying him to the corner coffee shop she leaned down to whisper in his ear. She whispered these words.. She whispered.. Daddy..'I love you.'
OndosSydney, New South Wales AustraliaFeb 14, 2013
Such a touching story and so well written. Bravo.
cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAFeb 14, 2013
Ty Ondos..thanks much riddle master..Glad you enjoyed..
cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAFeb 14, 2013
Ty Morgan..In tears I wrote..and only real men cry..
countrygirlpoetastatula, Florida USAFeb 14, 2013
beautiful story. gave me chills good ones..:) thanks for sharing
cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAFeb 14, 2013
Ty countrygirl.. Lovely to see you.
beautifulyouNew York, USAFeb 15, 2013
Hi there cafe, I haven't seen a fable like write in a long time. When we seek a way through something, we find one.
Moving story. Ty
cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAFeb 15, 2013
Ty beautifulyou.. This is a remake of an earlier poem and a story which I wanted to be much longer. This a highly condensed version.
FellsmanLake District, Cumbria, England UKFeb 15, 2013
Hi Jim
This is a real heart-tugger. A salutory tale so very well told.
Regards
Bill
cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAFeb 15, 2013
Ty Bill.. Most appreciated.. Ps.. Actually the blonde was asking for you.lol
rapturecapturekerry, Kerry IrelandFeb 15, 2013
Hi Cafe This did bring tears to my eyes, very touching story At the end of the Day...we are all Somebody's- Son -Daughter- Father- Mother- No matter what, where, or why...Thank you for sharing
cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAFeb 15, 2013
Ty rapture..To make others feel what I feel is a blessing..Your comment is special..
That was a excellent! Soo....you do think about something other than maidens and dungeons! or is that maidens in dungeons?
morgen90210singapore, Central Singapore SingaporeFeb 15, 2013
Lucy it's maiden distress in dungeon! with dragons too
cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAFeb 15, 2013
Ty Lucy..Glad you liked it dear.. but can't give away maiden secrets..lol
SCatlynBrecon, South Glamorgan, Wales UKSep 8, 2014
Ooh... Marbles... the sweetest thing....
(Lucy is so right - you certainly write about far more than maidens - you are more than capable of creating excellent poetry on any subject)
This is engaging, engrossing... and what an ending! Just love it!!! Truly....
Cat
cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USASep 8, 2014
Cat.. This was a remake of 'I live in a trash can.' Or the other way round. Can't remember. Thank you super much. Cafe
SCatlynBrecon, South Glamorgan, Wales UKSep 15, 2014
Oh, I Live in a Trashcan came first... and while this was reminiscent of it, completely different attitude.... (Trashcan is my favorite, but I love this one, too - just look at the comments from the men...)
GreatMarblespoem,CafeJim!
cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USASep 15, 2014
Cat.. I'm begining to think you are more awin all I think a re of the poems I've written than I am. Lol. Writing a poem that can move both men and women to tears is a great joy to me in that I realize the power of language can be effected in the simplest of words. But all in all I think a good story wins the day and to be able to capture that story especially when it involves the human drama is most rewarding. Cafe Thank you for your marvelous kindness and concern.
SCatlynBrecon, South Glamorgan, Wales UKSep 15, 2014
Trying to decipher: ' think you are more aware of... or ...'
Comments (20)
I haven't seen a fable like write in a long time.
When we seek a way through something, we find one.
Moving story. Ty
earlier poem and a story which I wanted
to be much longer. This a highly condensed
version.
This is a real heart-tugger. A salutory tale so very well told.
Regards
Bill
Ps.. Actually the blonde was asking
for you.lol
This did bring tears to my eyes, very touching story
At the end of the Day...we are all Somebody's- Son -Daughter- Father- Mother- No matter what, where, or why...Thank you for sharing
blessing..Your comment is special..
with dragons too
(Lucy is so right - you certainly write about far more than maidens - you are more than capable of creating excellent poetry on any subject)
This is engaging, engrossing... and what an ending!
Just love it!!! Truly....
Cat
other way round. Can't remember.
Thank you super much.
Cafe
Great Marbles poem, Cafe Jim!
than I am. Lol. Writing a poem that can move both men and women to
tears is a great joy to me in that I realize the power of language can be
effected in the simplest of words. But all in all I think a good story wins the
day and to be able to capture that story especially when it involves the
human drama is most rewarding.
Cafe
Thank you for your marvelous kindness and concern.
' think you are more aware of... or ...'
Cat
Kathy