Marbles

Twenty nine year old Susan Vale parked her
car on this cold December morn..
She wrapped her fur coat tightly around her
neck and commenced the one block walk to
the Lee Case office building where she worked
as a Para Legal. For twelve years Susan had braved
this side street of Baltimore often clutching her
pocketbook tightly as she stepped quickly past
side streets where the homeless would huddle
and hold out a hand for spare change..
But until this raw cold morn she had never parted
with even a handful of.change to one of these
losers, a name her office associates had arrogantly
given them..
And why should she? Had not life dealt her a bad
hand? As a child her parents abbanded her to
foster homes and her anger towards God, the world,
and everything in it had kept her soul in chains seeking
some kind of closure, something that could touch the
little girl within..and say, 'Her life had meaning, and that
there was some purpose to her existence..
Today she would take a chance on generosity, on a small
act of kindness..
She reached into her purse and fished out a fistful of
change and pushed the coins into the hand of this
homeless man whose tortured lonely blue eyes could
barely mumble a thank you..
Susan quickly walked away and being a half block
away the homeless man choked with tears cried out,
'Thank you marbles.' Susan frose in her tracks.
Marbles? 'That's what my daddy used to call me when
I was five.
She turned and stared deeply into the eyes of this
broken soul and rushed and knealt holding his
trembling frame to her. Through his choking tears
he throbbed, ' I am your daddy darling.'
And Susan wrapped this cold destroyed man with
her fur coat and half carrying him to the corner
coffee shop she leaned down to whisper in his
ear.
She whispered these words..
She whispered..
Daddy..'I love you.'
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Feb 2013

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Ondos
Such a touching story and so well written. Bravo.
cafetwo2010
Ty Ondos..thanks much riddle master..Glad you enjoyed..
cafetwo2010
Ty Morgan..In tears I wrote..and only real men cry..
countrygirlpoet
beautiful story. gave me chills good ones..:) thanks for sharingapplause
cafetwo2010
Ty countrygirl.. Lovely to see you.teddybear
beautifulyou
Hi there cafe,
I haven't seen a fable like write in a long time.
When we seek a way through something, we find one.

Moving story. Ty
bouquet
cafetwo2010
Ty beautifulyou.. This is a remake of an
earlier poem and a story which I wanted
to be much longer. This a highly condensed
version.
Fellsman
Hi Jim

This is a real heart-tugger. A salutory tale so very well told.

Regards

Bill wine wine
cafetwo2010
Ty Bill.. Most appreciated..
Ps.. Actually the blonde was asking
for you.lol
rapturecapture
Hi Cafe
This did bring tears to my eyes, very touching story
At the end of the Day...we are all Somebody's- Son -Daughter- Father- Mother- No matter what, where, or why...Thank you for sharingbouquet
cafetwo2010
Ty rapture..To make others feel what I feel is a
blessing..Your comment is special..bouquet
lucy1777
That was a excellent! Soo....you do think about something other than maidens and dungeons! or is that maidens in dungeons? grin
morgen90210
Lucy it's maiden distress in dungeon!
with dragons too
cafetwo2010
Ty Lucy..Glad you liked it dear.. but can't give away maiden secrets..lol
SCatlyn
Ooh... Marbles... the sweetest thing....

(Lucy is so right - you certainly write about far more than maidens - you are more than capable of creating excellent poetry on any subject)

This is engaging, engrossing... and what an ending!
Just love it!!! Truly....

Cat purple heart
cafetwo2010
Cat.. This was a remake of 'I live in a trash can.' Or the
other way round. Can't remember.
Thank you super much.
Cafe
SCatlyn
Oh, I Live in a Trashcan came first... and while this was reminiscent of it, completely different attitude.... (Trashcan is my favorite, but I love this one, too - just look at the comments from the men...)

Great Marbles poem, Cafe Jim!
cafetwo2010
Cat.. I'm begining to think you are more awin all I think a re of the poems I've written
than I am. Lol. Writing a poem that can move both men and women to
tears is a great joy to me in that I realize the power of language can be
effected in the simplest of words. But all in all I think a good story wins the
day and to be able to capture that story especially when it involves the
human drama is most rewarding.
Cafe
Thank you for your marvelous kindness and concern.
heart wings
SCatlyn
Trying to decipher:
' think you are more aware of... or ...'
help conversing

Cat help
godsprincessonline today!
From Cafe in Heaven to all the Fathers out there on Fathers Day 2018!!

Kathy sad flower crying
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