Hi, sophiasummer, ...scratched bones upon the wall... Such is the mystery of the cave dweller (prehistoric, or otherwise). ...dripping sweat falling into the lines of age... what great phraseology.
niah9Auckland, New ZealandMar 25, 2013
Hi Sophia...it reminded me of the Chinese ship that sunk many years ago, top of the west coast carrying many dead back to their homelands....Now bones are found in nooks and crannies, even caves.....in the Far North around Northern Hokianga.... Really enjoyed this one...Kathy
Sophia, for some reason your poem made me feel a bit like I do when I look in the mirror sometimes! Then it reminded me of those beautiful cave paintings of the horses that seemed to move if you lit a fire nearby. Very mysterious and full of the darkness of the unknown. There was a lot the cave dwellers didn't know, yet they flourished in to 'us'
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...scratched bones upon the wall... Such is the mystery of the cave dweller (prehistoric, or otherwise). ...dripping sweat falling into the lines of age... what great phraseology.
Really enjoyed this one...Kathy
heaving breathes
of the dying
might
dripping sweat falling
into the lines of age
Deep and lovely lines Sophia.Good stuff!
Rob
Lovely poetry