Monster Inside of My Closet

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Theres a monster that lives inside of my closet
and he looks just like me
He's awakened by the silence of darkness
because he cannot sleep
He has electric eyes
and they are filled with so many of his dreams
But along with inspiration they fall away into a great deep nothing
Sometimes I can hear him whispering scary things
from underneath my bed
But at times I just think he's alone and he just wants a friend
Other times I go into the bathroom
and I repeat his name
Then I turn the light back on just to see his face again
But what I see coming through in the mirror is a forgotten life
Then I think maybe he's not that scary he just wears a disguise
And when I close the door I see his silhouette at the end of the hall
I close my eyes and realize there is no one at all
Then the silence is abruptly broken by a telephone ring
I pick it up to say hello, but I can only hear screams
But I know now that I'm not being haunted
this is all just in my head
A mixture of over thinking about the shit I just want to forget

*JJF*
4/17/2013
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Posted: Apr 2013
About this poem:
Pulling out some old vinyl and chose to listen to some Pink Floyd Dark Side of the Moon, then I don't know, this is what I came up with....

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Bajanshay
Hi Jesse,

But what I see coming through in the mirror is a forgotten life.

Very introspective. Great write!wine bouquet
MickyTwo1984
Really enjoyed this.
Jyonnah
I see his silhouette at the end of the hall

Pink Floyd surely can arouse dark feelings sometimes. Awesome verse here. Well written, Jesse! wine thumbs up
fjamesj9701
thank you for reading Bajanshay, always a pleasure...Jessewine
fjamesj9701
Thank u Mickey glad you enjoyed...Jesse
darkhorse555
jesse a truly brillant write i know where your comming from i cant look in the mirror im missing something my shadow a true love dead you would go to hell and back to find itpeace handshake thumbs up wow
fjamesj9701
Thank you Cameal, and i think you're right about that.hole ...jesss
fjamesj9701
Thank you Jyonnah for reading and commenting. Yes Pink Floyd can really stimulate my over thinking and deep thinking. If you can hear it I was later listening to Nobody Home and I wrote this kinda to the tune .laugh Thank you again...Jessewine
fjamesj9701
Thank you DH for reading , and your comment is a kind one too....Jessetip hat
darkhorse555
i thought i would bring the monster beside my heart scarry it suit the poem in my eyes you know what i am on aboutthumbs up tip hat thanks
fjamesj9701
Yes sir Mr DH, ive come to terms that I am my own monster and even my worste enemylaugh . Yes i do believe i know where your coming from. Seems we sail the same ship my friend...Jessecheers
darkhorse555
if only the ship had wings head straight to heaven you can be the captin ill see what happens when you reach the gates in case i have to make a gateaway ha haangel
fjamesj9701
No you dont want that i will surely crash into an ice berg. I have that effect...JESSElaugh
darkhorse555
ha ha sounds a bit like mecheers grin
doctorwho10
boo excellent writecheers
morgen90210
I did write something similar some time back
thanks Jessecool
Poetnumber1
Excellent stuff Jesse,theres a monster in each of us,but in the closet it needs to be not outside in the open.cheers
fjamesj9701
Ah you frightened me DocholeThank you for reading and commenting...Jessebeer
fjamesj9701
Thanks Morgen, you Should Post it, there's nothing like a Good monster storydevil ...jesse
fjamesj9701
Thank you Mr MMPN1 glad to see you my friend. Seems u were gone a few days...Jessecheers
jonE2tone
Good write, I agree, I think we all have our own monsters
trurorob
Very deep and dark one Jesse, but good
Rob
fjamesj9701
Thank you Mr 2Tones, glad u stopped by...jesse
fjamesj9701
Awww C , you commented kindly with a rhyme, not something i see all the time. But dont sell yourself short your poetry is really good and if im a mirrored image it because i learned from you.grin
Thank you...Jessewine
fjamesj9701
Thank you Rob, Always a Pleasure to see you my friend...Jessehandshake
Fellsman
There's a real sense of 'The dark side of the moon' in this write - a chilling narrative for sure.

Bill wine wine
fjamesj9701
Thank you Bill, always a pleasure my friend...Jessehandshake
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