Broken

by Unknown

Nov 2009 524 Views 12 comments

Broken

Author: Unknown

A life is broken,
Lived by words unspoken

Tears and blood left to stain,
This soul plagued to pain

A victim once, a victim twice,
When will love Suffice?

No happiness left to ignite
For a life has been broken tonight.

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Posted: Nov 2009

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Comments (12)

Shortstack_15OPTaintor, Iowa USANov 22, 2009

A new personal favorite! So much can be said within few words.

virgosignSt. Julians, Majjistral MaltaNov 22, 2009

keep writing. there's talent.

walkermanok, IndiaNov 22, 2009

nice flow ..of words..and tears too ...to look back at the broken is to relive the drama..in the constant present there's no past..and broken too..

Shortstack_15OPTaintor, Iowa USANov 22, 2009

Thanks for the kind words. Too often I find that words limit my ability to express my true emotions, however that was not the case with this product.

boyshchrm6barrie, Ontario CanadaNov 22, 2009

Eloquent words to convey
great meaning and emotion. Lovely

Shortstack_15OPTaintor, Iowa USANov 23, 2009

Dawn7zArvada, Colorado USANov 23, 2009

are you okay is this about you if so big hug to you

Shortstack_15OPTaintor, Iowa USANov 23, 2009

Yes Dawn7z- this is a reflection of true events that happened. But I can assure you, that I'm no longer in those situations. I now just write to express the emotions I'm left with from such traumas. You will find in my other works, similar themes-some even more descriptive than others. This is one of my more "criptic" poems.
Thanks for the concerns, but all is fine.