Coated in Brown Fuzz There's just something Kiwi does! The sweet taste that's held within Every Bit is like a sin It's kinda hard to explain It's like backwards rain Every bite makes me so light headed The wait to have another bite is dreaded. My stomach spins out of control Almost sending me on a death toll It's a dizzy mood, AS my head gains altitude. Filling my stomach with a sweet pleasure Taking it to a new measure. Every bit even more divine. Shocking me up and down my spine.
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Posted: Jun 2009
About this poem:
Okay, I know it's a little odd- but I must admit, Even I still giggle when I read this.
ive never had a kiwi before but i wanna try one now lol. i cud replace kiwi with many other things that make me feel that way. very passionate way to describe ur love for a kiwi
purpledragonflyLeeds, West Yorkshire, England UKMar 6, 2010
Lovely poem made me smile!! And I like kiwi so next time I'm eating one I will tell someone about the time I read your poem!! Thankyou.
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