Done

Sick of crying,
Tired of trying,
No more lying
Inside I’m dying!

All the bleeding,
No longer needing,
No more pleading
Death is succeeding!
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Posted: Dec 2009

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johnlove66
Nice rymeing! Why such a sad commentary from such a beautiful woman? blushing love smitten sad flower bouquet
AnthonyRL
awww! Very angsty stuff here. I'm sorry you feel this way. But instead of letting death succeed please keeping trying to write it out through poems. I'm sorry for whatever your going through. If ya ever wanna talk message me. Sometimes a complete stranger is better than letting this sorta thing build up :/
Shortstack_15
Thank you for the kind thoughts and words.
Trecker
Let them have it. But they cannot take a beautiful mind and heart. It will always be yours. They tried to change you and mould you, but you resisted. You have won another battle. Be proud of yourself. You are unique and a rebel. You are growing strong in spite of all you experience. We all have our uniqe battle scars. Yet they can never beat us because we have hope and faith in ourselves. Keep growing and be what you are....unique. Keep up the good fight.....Soterios
Shortstack_15
Very insightful words! Thank you!
trurorob
to be able to express yourself like this, means that healing is occuring.
rob
Shortstack_15
Thank You. And I agree, healing through the words I express... the emotion is held within no more, and the scar shall fade in time.
kelsoxo
sounds like the death of the love for another. the horror and anguish sometimes make the death a welcome sight. its never easy tho
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