Collection of Haiku's

Eagles spinning down
as together they tumble
locked in combat

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The stars and the moon
together dance to the sun
worshiping all life


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The chorus of birds
rings out joyfully at dawn
celebrating life

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Waves crash on the shore
foam bubbling as they recede
back to the vast ocean
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Posted: Aug 2013

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ladyjewelonline today!
thumbs up I think you have this one down pat, each one draws a perfect picture with movementbouquet bouquet bouquet
socrates44online today!
Beautiful Haiku!

I love the choice of words
-so simple, yet so effective
painting such realistic images
that I can actually see them
with my mind's eye.

For the last piece
I can hear the sound of the waves
crashing on the shore
and the bubbling of the foam

Great Job!
Poetnumber1
I know I commented on this one already back at poetrysoup but I will again.The first two stanzas are my favorites out them all.I can really feel it drawing to my feelings.A well done job.Simple but effective.
darkhorse555
lovely piece linda I enjoyed the vision drawn beautiful pieceangel
shadow1950
hi Socrates I Ty for both your time reading and lovely comments I enjoy the simpleness of the tradition Haiku teddybear bouquet hug kiss wine
shadow1950
dearest M.M your support means much to me ty for reading teddybear bouquet purple heart hug kiss wine angel
shadow1950
creating vision with words is something you do well ty for seeing vision in these teddybear bouquet hug kiss wine
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