socrates44San Fernando, Trinidad and TobagoAug 4, 2013
Beautiful Haiku!
I love the choice of words -so simple, yet so effective painting such realistic images that I can actually see them with my mind's eye.
For the last piece I can hear the sound of the waves crashing on the shore and the bubbling of the foam
Great Job!
Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoAug 5, 2013
I know I commented on this one already back at poetrysoup but I will again.The first two stanzas are my favorites out them all.I can really feel it drawing to my feelings.A well done job.Simple but effective.
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I love the choice of words
-so simple, yet so effective
painting such realistic images
that I can actually see them
with my mind's eye.
For the last piece
I can hear the sound of the waves
crashing on the shore
and the bubbling of the foam
Great Job!