Tears in a Smile

She gave me a smile filled with tears
She asked I kept it a secret for her
I hoped I could soothe her despairs
So I questioned her a little farther
In the voice of a child she spoke
The smile filled with tears kept her centred
She said, "This morning I woke.
From the sleep that for years I had entered."

"I closed my eyes twelve years ago, you see
Wide awake without even a dream of my own
I sent my dreams downstream in a canope
Just to be used and left all alone."
She sighed the sighed of lost hope
Patted my hand that held her smile filled with tears
And whispered, "My child I just can't cope
Too much hatred, dashed dreams and fears."

As she walked away I was left with a smile
No longer filled with tears but lost
I thought she was not even hostile
And I wanted to help at all cost
So off I went to find her once more
I walked to the corner where she had turned
I followed my aim to reassure
But I was forbidden with a smile that burned.
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Posted: Aug 2013
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Poetnumber1
At the start sleeping beauty came to mind but as the story progressed it became more interesting than some story book character.But I liked the idea behind tears in a smile.I was left with the question why in the last phrase.Loved your poem Kle,it had me engaged.hug
CloudySky
It seemed as if perhaps you were speaking to your reflection. Enjoyed the read and the story you created.
Happygolucky4u
I agree that it seems like you were talking to you. That maybe you had traded your future your dreams for someone elses. And now you have decided to search for yours in the present. dunno I do so like it. Poetry is like beauty. It is seen in the eyes of the beholder. teddybear
kle76am
Poet#1 the story is real the character is not me. I am just expressing a meeting with a friend. She smiled but I could see the tears in her eyes and the phrase "Tears in a smile" popped in my head. Glad you enjoyed.kiss
kle76am
Cloudy...I never saw it that way so I read the poem again and actually saw where you coming from. Glad you enjoyed and thanks for giving me another perspective...cheers
kle76am
Happygolucky glad to meet you, so glad you could stop by my corner. I am glad you enjoyed the poem and I am always glad to hear your thoughts. Thank You kind lady.handshake cheers
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