She gave me a smile filled with tears She asked I kept it a secret for her I hoped I could soothe her despairs So I questioned her a little farther In the voice of a child she spoke The smile filled with tears kept her centred She said, "This morning I woke. From the sleep that for years I had entered."
"I closed my eyes twelve years ago, you see Wide awake without even a dream of my own I sent my dreams downstream in a canope Just to be used and left all alone." She sighed the sighed of lost hope Patted my hand that held her smile filled with tears And whispered, "My child I just can't cope Too much hatred, dashed dreams and fears."
As she walked away I was left with a smile No longer filled with tears but lost I thought she was not even hostile And I wanted to help at all cost So off I went to find her once more I walked to the corner where she had turned I followed my aim to reassure But I was forbidden with a smile that burned.
Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoAug 5, 2013
At the start sleeping beauty came to mind but as the story progressed it became more interesting than some story book character.But I liked the idea behind tears in a smile.I was left with the question why in the last phrase.Loved your poem Kle,it had me engaged.
I agree that it seems like you were talking to you. That maybe you had traded your future your dreams for someone elses. And now you have decided to search for yours in the present. I do so like it. Poetry is like beauty. It is seen in the eyes of the beholder.
kle76amOPnew york, New York USAAug 6, 2013
Poet#1 the story is real the character is not me. I am just expressing a meeting with a friend. She smiled but I could see the tears in her eyes and the phrase "Tears in a smile" popped in my head. Glad you enjoyed.
kle76amOPnew york, New York USAAug 6, 2013
Cloudy...I never saw it that way so I read the poem again and actually saw where you coming from. Glad you enjoyed and thanks for giving me another perspective...
kle76amOPnew york, New York USAAug 6, 2013
Happygolucky glad to meet you, so glad you could stop by my corner. I am glad you enjoyed the poem and I am always glad to hear your thoughts. Thank You kind lady.
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