GOODNIGHT

golden enchantingly beautiful
falling down the setting sun
into the distant horizon
glowing out in a darkening sky
a sigh breathing

her last breath
daylight upon the mountains
glistens in her shadows
dancing gold ripples
upon the shadowed surface


darkness swallows daylight
singing to the oncoming night
relinguishing her throne
making way for the stars
winking in the Heaven's
rocking gently

side to side
on a smiling moon
the eclipse
married in heaven's
when the sun
kisses the moon
golden silvery beautiful
goodnight
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Posted: Sep 2013

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Comments (21)

ladyjewel
hug lovely Liam, and I adore this.

when the sun
kisses the moon
teddybear
weemick1960
Hi Liam, Another fine piece my friend. Now you take the moon, the sun as it sets and God appears in his sky in his red cloak. You take the stars and hang them so sedately in the soft black and then you take the Love. Wonderful. One little question Liam. What have you left for the rest of us? Please, pretty please, give me back the moon, wont you? Loved it partner. You keep ever flying Liam. Catch you later,
Your friend,
MIKE.
Catch you on the flip side my friend.
darkhorse555
odette thank you for the pleasure of your beautiful comment appreciated deeplyangel
rapturecapture
Hi Darkhorse

A beautiful read full of magic and wonder...loved it

Thank you for sharinghug kiss angel wave
shadow1950
such vivid imagery here Liam excellent penteddybear bouquet hug kiss wine
diana_1
A beautiful way to say good night....imagery is beautiful and one feels enraptured with the night seeing it as something beautiful bouquet
darkhorse555
ladyjewel thank you dearly for the beautiful comment deeply appreciatedangel thumbs up
Yankee4you
Liam... always a captivating subject... even for a rock star... cool
fjamesj9701
You're a gifted heart for sure my friend, I admire you a lot. This is a great write and well I expressed...Jessecheers
Serenity4two
simply beautiful Liam --well done you ! F handshake
darkhorse555
mike amazingly beautiful comment heartfelt appreciated dear friend thank you deeplyangel thumbs up
darkhorse555
martina thank you for the amazing beautiful comment deeply appreciated dear friendangel
darkhorse555
linda thank you so much dear friend for the beautiful comment deeply appreciatedangel
Angel04
Very romantic, I can see two people sitting very close sharing this, Love it, as always Liam. love love love love love puts a smile on my face before I close my eyes blushing angel
orientalkoru
Liam when the "sun kisses the moon" it brings a surge of emotions ...and warmth from within... beautiful read... thank you. thumbs up
darkhorse555
diana thank you for the amazing beautiful comment dear friend deeply appreciatedangel wine
darkhorse555
yankee dear friend wonderful comment thank you appreciated deeplyangel wine
darkhorse555
jesse dear friend thank you kindly for the very beautiful comment deeply appreciatedangel wine
darkhorse555
thank you dear friend really beautiful comment fiona deeply appreciatedangel wine
darkhorse555
angela sweetheart thank you sweetly for the amazing beautiful comment smiling the soul in appreciationgrin kiss heart wings bouquet
darkhorse555
orientalkoru wonderful comment i thank you ever so much deeply appreciatedangel wine
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