come walk with me

by mimzy333unknown, Washington, USA

Nov 2013 426 Views 8 comments

come walk with me

walk with me among the stars till the beginning of hours. walk with me your hand in mine. let us make shadows a story forever in time. come walk with me your hand in mine lets find a tree and carve initials in the ages of pages. come walk with me in my dream along the silent stream where the trees gazzes. Come walk with me your hand in mine as hearts beat out the age old song of time. will you come walk with me?

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Posted: Nov 2013

About this poem:

just random thoughts

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Comments (8)

RedexNorthumberland, England UKNov 2, 2013

And beautiful random thoughts I enjoyed the walk too

beautifulyouNew York, USANov 2, 2013

'come walk with me in my dream along the silent stream where the trees gazzes.'

so lovely mimzy,
thanks for posting your write

darkhorse555donegal, Donegal IrelandNov 2, 2013

beautifully penned piece

mimzy333OPunknown, Washington USANov 2, 2013

thank you redex for your sweet coment im glad you enjoyed the journey.

mimzy333OPunknown, Washington USANov 2, 2013

thank you beautifulyou for your coment it dose my heart good to know my poetry brings joy to others

mimzy333OPunknown, Washington USANov 2, 2013

thank you liam for the nice complament

marikiaTbilisi, GeorgiaNov 3, 2013

You surely sound inspired, my dear. Enjoy your blissful walk with the one close to your heart. I remember once writing a poem on this here site much in the same spirit:

Bliss

A touch of moonbeams, gentle breeze,
A pleasant bubbling of the spring,
A tactful touch of hands, in dreams
They lived whole life in such a bliss.

Two lonely souls in whispering shadows,
Two desperate hearts engulfed in trance,
They walk in dark on flowery meadows,
Their lifelong dreams now realized.

Many thanks for sharing!