dreams

by mimzy333unknown, Washington, USA

Nov 2013 583 Views 17 comments

dreams

my dreams take me beyond the sun,to a land beyond. saber tooth lions,caves galore a streems slumber to wake no more. my dreams take me to the moon where romance,is a dance between butterflys amongst the willow trees. my dreams take me to the stars vast dark sea where the abyss i can see. my dreams take me every where and yet no where.

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Posted: Nov 2013

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trurorobAlicante, Valencia SpainNov 19, 2013

Good reflection on dreams, love the last line
rob

mimzy333OPunknown, Washington USANov 19, 2013

thankyou rob im glad you liked it

Odette67Penrith, Cumbria, England UKNov 19, 2013

my dreams take me to the moon where romance,is a dance between butterflys amongst the willow trees.

Nice poem mimzy, our dreams are an escape at times from all the tragedies in this world.

mimzy333OPunknown, Washington USANov 19, 2013

thankyou odett for the coment

sundayrose1san francisco, California USANov 19, 2013

Simply awesome my friend...The infinite possibilities of fantasies because of dreams. All my dreams were so confusing lately but, ah well....

Take care my friend.

SR

mimzy333OPunknown, Washington USANov 19, 2013

thankyou sr for the wonderfull comment.

darkhorse555donegal, Donegal IrelandNov 19, 2013

very beautifully painted words excellently penned dream

orientalkoruGlenella, Queensland AustraliaNov 19, 2013

dreams are realities in our subconscious-level...like the saying goes...if you can dream it you can do it...

and in Biblical times God did speak to his people through dreams, I believe he still does.

You took me to the Promised Land with your: "my dreams take me beyond the sun,to a land beyond." "

Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoNov 19, 2013

I enjoyed reading your poem tonight my friend. Dreams are the footsteps to tranquillity :).

fjamesj9701DunkinDonuts, Florida USANov 19, 2013

This whole physical thing and gravity I hope is only temporary but it is our dreams still yet to come and go as we please. Keep on dreaming, enjoyed the flight…Jesse

mimzy333OPunknown, Washington USANov 19, 2013

thank you liam for your kind comment

mimzy333OPunknown, Washington USANov 19, 2013

yes orient i do beleave god speaks through our dreams it is just a matter of weather we listen or not. thankyou for the comment

mimzy333OPunknown, Washington USANov 19, 2013

thank you my darling#1 poet friend for your comment

beautifulyouNew York, USANov 19, 2013

'my dreams take me to the moon where romance,is a dance between butterflys amongst the willow trees.'

that is wonderful imagery mimzy,

mimzy333OPunknown, Washington USANov 19, 2013

lol yes jessie some times we all have the same train we travel, i think that is what makes greatness.

mimzy333OPunknown, Washington USANov 20, 2013

thank you beautyfulyou for your coment,your coments are always special.

aviasSoutheast, Missouri USAJan 23, 2015

My friend..
Yes, dreams make all things possible....and aren't we lucky that we are able to dream? I can imagine your "land beyond" and "stars vast dark sea"...such images beckon in the mind...new and always possible, because.....we Dream!
Enjoying with you...Harriett

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